I love the poem but isn't it sad what people put them selves through just to get noticed by others? Why can't we just be our selves and still get noticed? The one that notices you then will truely appreciate who you are compared to the one who notices you for the mask that you put on.

very true! made me laugh

lovin it, wouldn't mind hearin more on the topic. Hate the man myself. I realise that hate is a strong word but, we are talking about a man who goes to war for oil. If we could only put that much effort and $ into helping those who really need it. YES I remember 9-11, I also have close ties with Iraq so I kinda know how they feel about the situation.

10 only 'cause i know the story behind it. Great job at showing your true colors

I absolutely loved it
the best happy poem ive read

saw the original typed way, very cool man. The poem is a great to think about things

wow

very visual, liked the twist at the end

no words. cryin

Ive been there before, funny how things that we think will never change seem to change the most

wow, very good

very well put. if its true, I'm very sorry to hear that, but if not you did a great job at putting emotion behind it that wasnt really there.

I just thought every one should know that, yes this poem is about Dave, and yes, its about my first day at school- tranfered colleges and had to leave him behind.

Zodiac, thanks for the comments. I wrote this a while ago while Dave and I were doing really well and I missed him vey much. Since then...well, everything has changed. Might need to write a new poem to explain it all. Anyway, thanks for the thoughts and believe me Ive thought it over a bunch.

good ? from poetandknowit. I'm often called dave's woman by him and his friends when I call or go to his house. So, when i signed up to this website it was an easy title for me to use. The simplest one that came to mind first. I, however, know that I am not property and refuse to be treated as such. This tile is more of a joke among friends rather than a tile. But thank you for your concern and if i knew of a way to change my name without loosing the scores and comments I may have very well thought about doing so.

wonderful ? B. Dave is my Fiance of 4 1/2 years. It has peeked my interest as to why my user name has sparked such an interest but nonetheless its my name among friends as well. well, its really daves woman but i dont particularly care for that one. this name was just the first thing i thought of when choosing a user anme for the website.

love that last line. many women try to embark on that adventure and often fail, as they very well should.

again, I got the inside scoop and now understand the meaning behind the words. Great stuff

very good my friend. sad but true isn't it?

poor little dog. Good poem.