on black dog by wilco
6 Feb 2005, 12:28 PM
poor little dog. Good poem.
on An Even Better God by wilco
3 Jan 2005, 8:15 PM
very good my friend. sad but true isn't it?
on A Girlâs Climax by Dovina
13 Jul 2004, 11:36 AM
I love the poem but isn't it sad what people put them selves through just to get noticed by others? Why can't we just be our selves and still get noticed? The one that notices you then will truely appreciate who you are compared to the one who notices you for the mask that you put on.
replying on Heaven Out Here by wilco
3 Jun 2004, 11:41 AM
E- First off, learn how to spell and proof read your work before submitting it and second, did you not read the poem all the way through? If you did you would have known that it wasn't about heaven being "sitting around getting tan with a beer" it was about the surrounding that God has created and how wonderful it is to enjoy them. Think about it. To enjoy the outdoors and God'd creation is "shallow"?
on The Tony Blair Which Project by wilco
18 May 2004, 6:29 PM
again, I got the inside scoop and now understand the meaning behind the words. Great stuff
on Kept by <{Baba^Yaga}>
11 May 2004, 5:10 PM
love that last line. many women try to embark on that adventure and often fail, as they very well should.
wonderful ? B. Dave is my Fiance of 4 1/2 years. It has peeked my interest as to why my user name has sparked such an interest but nonetheless its my name among friends as well. well, its really daves woman but i dont particularly care for that one. this name was just the first thing i thought of when choosing a user anme for the website.
on Daddy's Little Girl by daveslady
11 May 2004, 5:01 PM
good ? from poetandknowit. I'm often called dave's woman by him and his friends when I call or go to his house. So, when i signed up to this website it was an easy title for me to use. The simplest one that came to mind first. I, however, know that I am not property and refuse to be treated as such. This tile is more of a joke among friends rather than a tile. But thank you for your concern and if i knew of a way to change my name without loosing the scores and comments I may have very well thought about doing so.
Zodiac, thanks for the comments. I wrote this a while ago while Dave and I were doing really well and I missed him vey much. Since then...well, everything has changed. Might need to write a new poem to explain it all. Anyway, thanks for the thoughts and believe me Ive thought it over a bunch.
on I Love You by jude
28 Apr 2004, 3:41 PM
Ive been there before, funny how things that we think will never change seem to change the most
on Moving Forward In Reverse (For Ann) by wilco
18 Apr 2004, 11:17 PM
no words. cryin
on Jesus Rises from the Grove by wilco
9 Apr 2004, 9:55 PM
very visual, liked the twist at the end
on My Day Off by wilco
15 Mar 2004, 4:27 PM
I absolutely loved it
the best happy poem ive read
the best happy poem ive read
on Hope, Approximately by wilco
10 Mar 2004, 7:51 PM
10 only 'cause i know the story behind it. Great job at showing your true colors
on waking up to fucking reality by d35
4 Mar 2004, 10:17 PM
no words to describe how I feel. Thanks for sharing
on An Infection in the Brain by GregDeEgg
4 Mar 2004, 10:08 PM
its a wonder how you could so correctly write out the first thoughts of a woman when she finds out that she is with child. great