on Child of Troy by Caducus
27 May 2004, 10:26 AM
also bystander's
on some deleted poem
27 May 2004, 10:29 AM
yah, we've only just begun feels a little silly, but this is a really good one..
on some deleted poem
28 May 2004, 10:38 AM
oi vey...a guy fucked you. you want something else, even though there was no pinky promise?
In the immortal words of Clint Eastwood: Deserve's got nothin to do with it.
In the immortal words of Clint Eastwood: Deserve's got nothin to do with it.
on some deleted poem
28 May 2004, 2:21 PM
the title could be death metal.
on Get it straight by tre
28 May 2004, 2:36 PM
zappa, monster guitarist....not poet. this is okay
on some deleted poem
28 May 2004, 2:18 PM
wha?
on The Nude by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I.
29 May 2004, 1:49 PM
by far the most profound poeme i have ever read...shear Genious...10
on A short trip home by titan69
6 Jun 2004, 2:59 PM
abraham lincoln with a curling iron
in his pants.
in his pants.
on some deleted poem
6 Jun 2004, 3:02 PM
wha???
on love by francis nor capule
4 Jun 2004, 3:26 PM
are you kidding?
on Solipsistic, Drunk, But Still Friends by horus8
4 Jun 2004, 7:15 AM
on One O Five in the A.M. by Enkidu
3 Jun 2004, 6:27 AM
i assume you are trying to make the worst list, so i shall help with zero.
on Heaven Out Here by wilco
2 Jun 2004, 7:37 PM
very nice.
on some deleted poem
2 Jun 2004, 7:40 PM
what is up with the ones and sixes??? i think this is the best of your poetry that i have read. darkness lurks somewhere in a scene artfully painted.
on some deleted poem
2 Jun 2004, 12:52 PM
i think it is brilliant
on bel-air by DR Limerick
31 May 2004, 7:39 PM
has everything a good limerick should have... lewdness, humor, and fucked up bel-air, mid-air rhyme...and it opens up with the conventional "there once was a man from.." perfect
on pie man by DR Limerick
31 May 2004, 7:42 PM
i can only assume you are shooting to make the 20 worst board with this one, so -1-
on Piccadilly to Baker Street by Caducus
2 Jun 2004, 7:46 PM
i wont say ugh, but i will say a bit verbose, and the fact that it was intentional doesnt make it any more the readable, sire. courtesy 8
on Piccadilly to Baker Street by Caducus
2 Jun 2004, 7:47 PM
and because no way does it deserve the one and the three...need a balance.
on STEP 4 by the codeine kid
2 Jun 2004, 12:43 PM
would be much better without that last line...eek that is horrible.