on Oh No! by foothangingoutofass
23 May 2004, 1:34 PM
by far the best poem i have read on this site. -0-
on some deleted poem
24 May 2004, 6:04 AM
i have no clue
on some deleted poem
26 May 2004, 5:44 AM
Bob Dylan meets Laurel and Hardy...i will give you a spin....7
on Suicide of the Ego by Drifting Shadow
26 May 2004, 5:47 AM
ugh...
on some deleted poem
26 May 2004, 5:50 AM
not bad...the wording is a bit confusing at times and the middle could stand a little touching up...perhaps shave a few articles or pronouns....it has real potential, and i am looking forward to seeing it develop...interesting poem.
on Child of Troy by Caducus
27 May 2004, 10:25 AM
in to ...this separation bothers me...but overall this is a really good poem.
on As You Are by MacFrantic
12 May 2004, 8:05 AM
that is quite ambitious, and i think you pulled it off reasonably well.
on FINGER PIE by titan69
12 May 2004, 3:04 PM
that is the smelliest poem ever written. 10
on EGG by ?-Dave_Mysterious-?
13 May 2004, 6:05 AM
I think it becomes a little redundant, oblong as it were toward the end. I like the first stanza. But from there is seems to drag a little. the ending is powerful but it feels a trifle long.
i would take an e or 2 out of the final line, and perhaps add a bit more repetition to the middle.
i would take an e or 2 out of the final line, and perhaps add a bit more repetition to the middle.
on THE BEST POEM EVER!!!!!! by ?-Dave_Mysterious-?
13 May 2004, 6:12 AM
best poem i ever read. I wouldnt change a thing...0
on On the Discovery of the Hated Tree and Another T.V. Dinner by MacFrantic
17 May 2004, 9:25 AM
I think we treeists...fucking hilarious -0-
on untitled: dedicated to my soldier/husband by SweetJuliet10
14 May 2004, 5:48 AM
very funny this one. Untitled, followed by a title.
if i had not read this, i would not believe that it could be written.
if i had not read this, i would not believe that it could be written.
on Tasha:dedicated to my dear friend by SweetJuliet10
14 May 2004, 5:50 AM
furious with god...always have memories....
really special. best poem i have read in a long time. -0-
really special. best poem i have read in a long time. -0-
on feelings of the inside by SweetJuliet10
14 May 2004, 5:52 AM
take some tylenol, then take a class in English Fundamentals.
on some deleted poem
14 May 2004, 1:32 PM
i cannot imagine anything worse. should easily make the list. that is what you were going for, wasn't it? here is some help. -1-
on The Ballad of Fraser Allonby Q.C., Barrister-At-Law by wFraser Allonby Q.C.w
14 May 2004, 1:36 PM
best poem i ever read -0-
on LOVE-ABOVE LISTE by Everyone
18 May 2004, 10:11 AM
best poem i ever read, and every line rhymes with every other line. brilliant.
on done than said by francis nor capule
19 May 2004, 9:40 AM
I don't like the last stanza. up until then, i had 10.
on I miss my gummibear. by Freethinker1602
19 May 2004, 3:47 PM
oi vey. whelp, here is a spin>>>>>>1 sorry, i cannot control the arbitrary nature of the spin.