on love.term by ggawrysi
7 May 2004, 8:55 AM
so.....where's the fucking?
on Beard my Homemade Negro Jesus (Improved! With AIDS!) by Everyone
5 May 2004, 11:27 AM
HAHAHAHAHAHa. bearded with love.
on When she beats me by Win
5 May 2004, 11:24 AM
The love bout.
on On the Discovery of High Noon and The Devil in a Glass Jar. by MacFrantic
5 May 2004, 8:02 AM
I fail to see the connection between the two limericks, but I do not see a real need for connection... after all we can only post every 2 days. Funny limericks.
on The Influence of Anxiety by Nicholas Jones
5 May 2004, 7:52 AM
I love it. There are far too many poetry snobs and pedants on this site. I say fuck poetry.
on Where Have All the Punk Rockers Gone? by wilco
5 May 2004, 7:36 AM
Don Henley??? Oi vey.
on American Idle by wilco
5 May 2004, 7:27 AM
ANybody who curses at the cubs gets an automatic 10. though this was a very good poem on its own.
on California triolets by zodiac
5 May 2004, 7:25 AM
Good poem about california toilets, though i am not so sure the subject matter really reflects the title.
on Natural Remedy by richa
4 May 2004, 11:53 AM
I find it less readable now. Well, less clear.
on The road to melancholy by INTRANSIT
3 May 2004, 3:32 PM
Great. So many hours have i spent looking at those fucking cones, or horses or even the white lines, counting, smoking...
on sad bastard by FreeFormFixation
3 May 2004, 3:20 PM
Good, i think done with the proper amount of restraint, (well, at least as much as can be exercised in a poem of this nature). I think perhaps a little cutting to shorten.
on Natural Remedy by richa
3 May 2004, 3:17 PM
To taste if needs be...i aint no fuckin gardner, and maybe this phrase is an apt ending amongst gardening type folk, in the fold, but it leaves me a little limp, and desirous of something more satisfying.
on All Alone by QuirkyWonder
3 May 2004, 11:05 AM
put down the pen.. and slowly back away from the paper. Pick up a chair and begin to bludgeon yourself until you can no longer stand.
on the beale street mud festival. by wilco
3 May 2004, 9:17 AM
Very funny.
on Its the same old static & flaccid striptease. by SupremeDreamer
28 Apr 2004, 11:20 AM
I think it is good, except for the fact that you do not degrade women enough. How bout a dose of misogyny tossed in for good measure, and maybe snuffle up some rails in there somewhere?
on AIDS in a van by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I.
24 Apr 2004, 12:19 PM
um, somebody gave this a 10 because that is where the spinning wheel of his or her mouse landed. Do you not know that all voting on this site is arbitrary??? Well, maybe not all, because apparently there are some not with the program. here's my spin....
on jammin in the basement by xunitedx
24 Apr 2004, 6:16 AM
HOly shit that is horrible...it is so bad that it is good. 10
on Words that the Earth has to say⦠by nothingtoanyone
24 Apr 2004, 6:14 AM
last line is perfect...do to plain and simple stupidity....Genius! Unfortunately, the rest of it is endlessly unbearable drivel, and it is only 9 lines long. Well...Here goes the spin...5