on The How To on Haikus by <Wankster>
24 Apr 2004, 6:11 AM
yawn
on From Treehouse To Factory by Shardik
20 Apr 2004, 7:21 AM
not learned, earned.
on Sissy Faggot by Shardik
20 Apr 2004, 7:15 AM
unbelievable. It reads like a page of my diary. I can SOOOO relate to this. Kewl.
my parents really never understood me neither. I hav not cut mysefl in 2 weeks, but its so hard.
my parents really never understood me neither. I hav not cut mysefl in 2 weeks, but its so hard.
on The Flame by Fire_is_cool
19 Apr 2004, 9:04 AM
better than smoke inhalation, which is more than i can say for many of the others.
on Moving Forward In Reverse (For Ann) by wilco
19 Apr 2004, 7:36 AM
it is especially difficult for a reader of lyrics to imagine the beat, the cant, the rhythm of a song, when it does not rhyme. but, even as a poem, i think this is very good.
on Do You Like It by hotwire
19 Apr 2004, 7:31 AM
i can see it being a good song.
on The Song of Summer Youth (II) by cleverdevice
19 Apr 2004, 7:24 AM
could be good. I won't vote now, because this obviously needs to be edited.
on stranger by francis nor capule
19 Apr 2004, 7:19 AM
i think this COULD be good, but the punctuation is horribly distracting, as is the poor grammar.
on I Can Write A Wrong, But I Can't Right A Poem by horus8
16 Apr 2004, 3:25 PM
it appears the real play is acted out in the gallery.
on when do dreams fade? by francis nor capule
16 Apr 2004, 2:56 PM
you might find your soul buried beneath your language skills if you bothered to look for them. I think the lack of sensation left in the wake of pain is a theme that CAN be handled without cliche, but it takes flawless execution to do so. And a bit more imagination.
on Diptych by coffeespoons
16 Apr 2004, 8:55 AM
I don't care what category you put it in. I think it is great. I just love it.
on horus8 accepts black cock for cash by King Abdullah II
15 Apr 2004, 7:07 PM
if you are going to write a pohm about sumbody , at lest try to make it funny.
on Tales From The Outhouse by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I.
15 Apr 2004, 12:48 PM
and i didnt even read the poem
on Tales From The Outhouse by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I.
15 Apr 2004, 12:47 PM
this by far is the funniest page i have read on this site....yet. priceless.
replying on forgetful dyke by elizabethann
15 Apr 2004, 12:32 PM
wait, you forgot one.
Author has "angel" in his/her name.
Author has "angel" in his/her name.
on Metaphorically Challenged by Enkidu
15 Apr 2004, 11:58 AM
HAHAHAHA. Lovely
on On A Cliff by colndodg
15 Apr 2004, 11:49 AM
rife with cliche. cold as ice. forest for the trees. beg for forgiveness, pray for rain. I realize that this was probably intentional, as the whole poem is about "taking that leap" off the cliff, but still, it is hard to read so many without cringing a little. 6
on My Life by Fire_is_cool
14 Apr 2004, 6:59 PM
umm if you die, does the tunnel grow an end?
on Feel the Love by Fire_is_cool
14 Apr 2004, 6:56 PM
HAHAHAHAHA. that is some funny ass bullshit kegparty poetry.