on JJâs Church by Dovina
15 Mar 2005, 9:05 AM
Substitutionary is funny. Dyn-O-MITE!
on Delusions Of A Peaceful Place by Stacy Stewart
15 Mar 2005, 9:02 AM
I think this is poetic and potentially potent.
replying on wishes by the_poetess
15 Mar 2005, 8:52 AM
PPS I assumed you were young. It may be far worse than I origninally thought.
replying on wishes by the_poetess
15 Mar 2005, 8:50 AM
P.S. In order to learn how to speak and write a language, one need not attend school.
replying on wishes by the_poetess
15 Mar 2005, 8:49 AM
"Yes my English is by far not up to par, for that i have , and do apologize. My grammer is even worse"
You have just admitted to incompetence as a writer. Can you not see this?
I never asked for your sordid family history. Please keep the details of your life to yourself, until you get to the Jerry Springer stage. Then let them fly like your shoes.
Mr. Hot Shot is out to lunch. Would you like to leave a message?
You have just admitted to incompetence as a writer. Can you not see this?
I never asked for your sordid family history. Please keep the details of your life to yourself, until you get to the Jerry Springer stage. Then let them fly like your shoes.
Mr. Hot Shot is out to lunch. Would you like to leave a message?
on The Glass by dancin_n_da_moonlite
14 Mar 2005, 5:34 PM
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on The Glass by dancin_n_da_moonlite
14 Mar 2005, 5:33 PM
A G Q X R Z T G G W T
s i q x u g g w w a a
on The Lonely Man by i_am_the_popsicle
14 Mar 2005, 5:29 PM
This is a bulging turnip.
"Frankly I'd rather fair my chances among men." What could this mean?
their?
"their are two testaments." Please pick out the egregious crime against language contained this phrase.
clearly "testaments" should be "testicles"
"Frankly I'd rather fair my chances among men." What could this mean?
their?
"their are two testaments." Please pick out the egregious crime against language contained this phrase.
clearly "testaments" should be "testicles"
on an unbiased voice (or the most biased one you'll hear) by i_am_the_popsicle
14 Mar 2005, 7:14 AM
This is almost completely illegible. Is English your native language? (I hope not)
on The Because Collection by INTRANSIT
14 Mar 2005, 6:51 AM
52 card pick-up
replying on wishes by the_poetess
12 Mar 2005, 10:11 AM
You are incompetent. Stop chasing rainbows and start chasing that elusive C minus in your English class. I would suggest you start by swallowing your teacher's bulbous bratwurst; it is your only real chance.
on bleeding by crooked_smile
12 Mar 2005, 10:03 AM
frightful
replying on The Man I Love by Dovina
11 Mar 2005, 7:17 AM
this thread of discussion has caused me to drop a plump in my trousers
replying on The Man I Love by Dovina
11 Mar 2005, 7:03 AM
LOL. Wish i had written that comment
replying on Poet, Earth mover by INTRANSIT
10 Mar 2005, 3:16 PM
and it makes a difference if you want anybody to know what the fuck you are talking about.
replying on Poet, Earth mover by INTRANSIT
10 Mar 2005, 3:15 PM
whose "best solution"? whose approval? I don't see anyone suggesting a solution, nor anyone seeking approval. Verdict: Very Dim.
on The Snow Globe by Caducus
10 Mar 2005, 10:46 AM
how about "borne on her tears? "
I would remove 'weeping' from the last stanza, maybe more.
there is a power to this. I like it a lot.
I would remove 'weeping' from the last stanza, maybe more.
there is a power to this. I like it a lot.
Interesting comment to write on "this poor woman's comment page."
I suppose irony is a foreign concept.
then you go on to apologize to those who have had to read all this crap, while posting MORE CRAP.
Beautiful stuff.