on stab in the dark by not_a_philosopher
21 Mar 2005, 6:17 PM
Do you mean that you could care less, or that you couldn't care less? If it is the former, why not say, "I could care more?"
on stab in the dark by not_a_philosopher
21 Mar 2005, 6:15 PM
Yahhh, Vee believes in nuhsink, Lebowski.
You sink vee are kidding und making mit da funny schtuff?
You sink vee are kidding und making mit da funny schtuff?
on A good little poem by INTRANSIT
21 Mar 2005, 6:49 AM
good to hear you won't be needing that viagra regimen afterall.
on Chrystal lane swift want's me, bad. by horus8
19 Mar 2005, 1:34 PM
funny that this is your highest ranked poem.
replying on Zin/Enough/Things/Squeeze/Flow by gregsamsa222
19 Mar 2005, 1:20 PM
Novelty is overrated. Here, a story is being told and being told well. How original is it to die? Doesn't make the death of someone you love any less painful or important or novel.
The writing is direct and concrete. It is written with both skill and emotional restraint, to the degree which is possible anyway.
I can hear an argument that this is not poetry, and, as I am not really a poet, I would not argue. I would argue if one were to posit that this is not exemplary writing. It is.
The writing is direct and concrete. It is written with both skill and emotional restraint, to the degree which is possible anyway.
I can hear an argument that this is not poetry, and, as I am not really a poet, I would not argue. I would argue if one were to posit that this is not exemplary writing. It is.
on "America The Beautiful" by jroday
18 Mar 2005, 7:20 AM
I wanted to read your "what have you" but, as an American, I couldn't be arsed.
on Drinking before noon with Bukowski by Beyond_Dreams
17 Mar 2005, 7:40 PM
I thought this was good, right up until the last few lines.
on Memory by chocolate9009
17 Mar 2005, 7:36 PM
ROFLMMFAO
replying on A Plea To The Mother(Mother Earth) by Rainbow_chaser
17 Mar 2005, 7:34 PM
you go girl. talk to the hand. kick em to the curb, and all that...
replying on A Plea To The Mother(Mother Earth) by Rainbow_chaser
17 Mar 2005, 7:32 PM
It is funny, though, how you have taken it upon yourself to rewrite her comment so that it might make some sort of dildo sense to an Oprah addict dangling from Dr. Phil's cock.
the loose, imprecise nature of her writing in this comment should have shown me that her exact words are not important...??
Please tell me you were joking when you wrote that.
Then you go on to tell me that she meant something other than what I read in some language approximating plain English, because you are so much better equipped than I am to decode her? Fucking laughable. Absolutely pathetic.
the loose, imprecise nature of her writing in this comment should have shown me that her exact words are not important...??
Please tell me you were joking when you wrote that.
Then you go on to tell me that she meant something other than what I read in some language approximating plain English, because you are so much better equipped than I am to decode her? Fucking laughable. Absolutely pathetic.
replying on A Plea To The Mother(Mother Earth) by Rainbow_chaser
17 Mar 2005, 7:20 PM
LOL. Nice dodge. If I am unable to make sense out of the parts, how can I determine what she is saying on the whole, short of making massive assumptions that may or may not be correct? How the fuck do you know what she means? Did she explain it to you privately? Are you one of those bible interpreters that changed "blessed are the poor" to "blessed are the poor in spirit"?
Hmmmmm.... awfully strange that you think she is right about something that YOU inserted into her comment. What are the chances?
Hmmmmm.... awfully strange that you think she is right about something that YOU inserted into her comment. What are the chances?
replying on JJâs Church by Dovina
17 Mar 2005, 3:44 PM
she said pretzels.
replying on A Plea To The Mother(Mother Earth) by Rainbow_chaser
17 Mar 2005, 3:37 PM
ummm. REad the comment that I replied to again, if you can muddle through it.
replying on Apostrophetic Loss by Dovina
17 Mar 2005, 7:36 AM
do you know what the word "hackneyed" means? From this previous post, I would guess not.
What exactly are you accusing Z of circumlocuting? Is he skirting some central point in order to avoid having to address it?
What exactly are you accusing Z of circumlocuting? Is he skirting some central point in order to avoid having to address it?
replying on A Plea To The Mother(Mother Earth) by Rainbow_chaser
17 Mar 2005, 7:21 AM
"Hang in"
Now, that is sound advice.
Now, that is sound advice.
replying on A Plea To The Mother(Mother Earth) by Rainbow_chaser
17 Mar 2005, 7:18 AM
ugh. What could this comment say about your "growth stage"?
True strength is found in weakness?
I suppose true growth is then found in non-growth?
Where did you come up with your 90% figure? I suppose you fancy yourself one of the 10%.
We, as sentient, adult beings, think in words. You think poorly.
"90% just try to walk around pretending they are "strong" or never feel alone or unsure of themselves...or perhaps they are just compleatly out of touch with who they really are"
You could not be more wrong about this.
True strength is found in weakness?
I suppose true growth is then found in non-growth?
Where did you come up with your 90% figure? I suppose you fancy yourself one of the 10%.
We, as sentient, adult beings, think in words. You think poorly.
"90% just try to walk around pretending they are "strong" or never feel alone or unsure of themselves...or perhaps they are just compleatly out of touch with who they really are"
You could not be more wrong about this.
replying on The Measurement by thepinkbunnyofdoom
16 Mar 2005, 2:53 PM
LOL. Yeah. I got that.
replying on JJâs Church by Dovina
16 Mar 2005, 6:13 AM
what a loaf.
on The Measurement by thepinkbunnyofdoom
16 Mar 2005, 6:08 AM
Some sort of concrete imagery would not hurt this. I feel left out.