replying on wishes by the_poetess
9 Mar 2005, 11:19 AM
to truly refuse to accept my last comment would be to not reply to it. you replied. this act implies acceptance. You, in light of this overwhelming evidence, DO accept my comment.
you are swelling nicely in your stew, which simmers fancifully around your browne sides. you are almost ready. I am beginning to salivate at the prosepect of having a nibble.
you are swelling nicely in your stew, which simmers fancifully around your browne sides. you are almost ready. I am beginning to salivate at the prosepect of having a nibble.
replying on wishes by the_poetess
9 Mar 2005, 10:50 AM
YOu are a dumpling that lives in the fetid stew of your own incompetence.
on eat what you want. by burgerking33
9 Mar 2005, 7:29 AM
NO! Don't eat that burger, Don't eat that ice cream!
Give it to me!
Give it to me!
replying on eat what you want. by burgerking33
9 Mar 2005, 7:28 AM
do you think that the poems written by CLS are good?
on Poet, Earth mover by INTRANSIT
9 Mar 2005, 7:22 AM
one pause to mimic....
I like it. the first stanza is unnecessarily difficult, especially while we try to decode "portently"
I like it. the first stanza is unnecessarily difficult, especially while we try to decode "portently"
replying on Poet, Earth mover by INTRANSIT
9 Mar 2005, 7:20 AM
no. portentous is the adj form. portentously would be the adv form.
replying on a note to the politically inactive fundamentalist christians by i_am_the_popsicle
9 Mar 2005, 7:12 AM
wait a minute. I had no idea you were trying to pass this off as a poeme. -10-
replying on Disable by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I.
9 Mar 2005, 6:46 AM
my email address is on my home page
on Disable by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I.
8 Mar 2005, 5:32 PM
I would like to request a link to one of your P.I. Readings, as recommended to me by jeremi, horus8, and the 3 or 4 other names he has on this site. I hear they are the highest imaginable art, and would love to sample.
on Fat girls Who Wear Short Skirts During Winter Quarter by DurtKL
8 Mar 2005, 9:59 AM
yah. this gives me a chubby.
on The Reply by LintyWeenis
7 Mar 2005, 10:56 AM
Can't say I loved the poem, but I cannot give less than a 10 to "LintyWeenis"
on You Fell Asleep First by jessicazee
7 Mar 2005, 10:53 AM
Liked it better before. The language seemed clearer. The stuff you have added is interesting, but poorly worded, imho.
Well, it may have gone on a bit, but the first stanza made me guffaw with a recklessness I had not known since middle school. I think I will give you a real vote on this one, as it is a nice change-up from that programming hunger bullshit. You have earned it with what I percieve to be genuine repentance. Forgiveness is yours my child.
on a note to the politically inactive fundamentalist christians by i_am_the_popsicle
5 Mar 2005, 8:36 AM
Well, if nothing else, at least this puddle of poorly executed drivel has sparked another masterpiece from
-=Dark_Angel=-, P.I.
For providing the impetus for his his comment, I applaud you, and, really, I should vote 10 on this asinine ramble based on his comment alone. But I cannot, in good conscience, do so.
-=Dark_Angel=-, P.I.
For providing the impetus for his his comment, I applaud you, and, really, I should vote 10 on this asinine ramble based on his comment alone. But I cannot, in good conscience, do so.
on We Have Nothing to Talk About by jessicazee
4 Mar 2005, 4:18 PM
stiff as a board.
on Pain by DaRkMoOnLuVeR
4 Mar 2005, 4:16 PM
at least by the bay.
that's just bloody good writing.
that's just bloody good writing.
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