on Invisible Poo by kthay
13 May 2004, 1:05 PM
Bow'ls
on I Hate Andy Jeon by JoyLuck
13 May 2004, 1:06 PM
bad ascii art is forbidden.
on some deleted poem
13 May 2004, 5:46 PM
actually I think I'll voat
on some deleted poem
13 May 2004, 5:46 PM
Here's a 5 as a gift from me to you
on Domingos by candaliesa
13 May 2004, 6:18 PM
AABB rhyme schemes hurt me and cause my forehead to slam the desk in siezure.
on some deleted poem
13 May 2004, 6:37 PM
Have I heard this before? Or parts of it?
on goofy poem to prove I'm not morbid (Ode to an Onion) by greym0on
13 May 2004, 6:49 PM
Neruda you aren't
on some deleted poem
13 May 2004, 6:53 PM
Okay okay. Since sliver will no doubt shove an iron rod up my rectum unless I comment on this one with a vote:
'
-9-
because it makes me feel drunk..
Incidentally, I drink to make other people more interesting
'
-9-
because it makes me feel drunk..
Incidentally, I drink to make other people more interesting
on Random by <{Baba^Yaga}>
13 May 2004, 7:15 PM
-blink-
on The Plea of the Beneathednessified (New poetry scheme!) by Enkidu
14 May 2004, 11:53 AM
beneathednessified makes me think of a cross between George Bush on a saturday night after seven beers, and e.e. cummings on a very bad day
on All Square by Enkidu
14 May 2004, 11:57 AM
What in the name of......
I suppose this fits into the category of bad ascii art. I'm not sure though.
No matter how I read this, sideways, diagonally, top to bottom, bottom to top, circularly, or after after a few shots of smirnov, this still doesen't make much more sense than the pimple on my bum.
Maybe a few BableFish iterations will improve it.
I suppose this fits into the category of bad ascii art. I'm not sure though.
No matter how I read this, sideways, diagonally, top to bottom, bottom to top, circularly, or after after a few shots of smirnov, this still doesen't make much more sense than the pimple on my bum.
Maybe a few BableFish iterations will improve it.
on Tasha:dedicated to my dear friend by SweetJuliet10
14 May 2004, 11:48 AM
How touching. It makes me want to cry tears of suffocation at the rhyme heart/apart. Then I'll die.
one day we will meet again best friends me and you would be better off with two commas as you can see lack of punctuation makes one sound either like a non-anglophone frenchman reading the King James Bible or like a a somnambulant George Bush.
Here's a -4- to take the pain away
one day we will meet again best friends me and you would be better off with two commas as you can see lack of punctuation makes one sound either like a non-anglophone frenchman reading the King James Bible or like a a somnambulant George Bush.
Here's a -4- to take the pain away
on death makes me vain! by SweetJuliet10
14 May 2004, 12:01 PM
Painful and hell only rhyme when Dante is turning over in his grave to the tune of Robert Pinsky's consonantal clip-clop crap.
Now, about the poem. Wait, it's not a poem.
If I have to read the words
life and knife just one more time
Then I'll go into convulsions
More than at this very rhyme
Now, about the poem. Wait, it's not a poem.
If I have to read the words
life and knife just one more time
Then I'll go into convulsions
More than at this very rhyme
on some deleted poem
14 May 2004, 12:46 PM
Do you have a speech problem? Did you suffer a stroke in early childhood while watching Star Trek the next Generation that permanantly damaged the left half of your brain?
on untitled: dedicated to my soldier/husband by SweetJuliet10
14 May 2004, 3:32 PM
Now now it wasn't nice of you to delete my comment like that. I mean, I'd just re-post it, but I can't because I don't remember: partly beccause your poem had a mental black-out effect similar to the pressure of a steel baseball bat when applied to the skull of a living person. O well.
on A Year Later (edited a bit) by Sasha
15 May 2004, 7:27 AM
in case you ask why I edited and trashed all your votes it was because the spelling errors in this villanelle threatened to send it to the bow'ls of Pinsky's horrid Inferno.
Please feel free to tell me what a wackjob I am
Thank you
Please feel free to tell me what a wackjob I am
Thank you
on this bitter heart by New Life Drug
15 May 2004, 9:46 AM
You are under arrest by the Gay Police for rhyming death/breath twice and apart/heart three times in the same poem. Each of these rhymes is exhausted and more tired of overuse than the most attractive of Nevada whores. Therefore, for the sake of these poor rhymes (and they are poor) you are sentenced to wear the -0- of shame.
You have the right...no, wait...the requirement to remain silent
You have the right...no, wait...the requirement to remain silent