on An art undone by Bobjim
15 May 2004, 12:10 PM
o'erdone
on Ash Wednesday by Dreamer
15 May 2004, 12:50 PM
I think I'll go cry now.
on some deleted poem
15 May 2004, 12:51 PM
What the hell?
on Not Real by DeadtotheWorld
15 May 2004, 12:51 PM
Reason/season
yeuch
yeuch
on some deleted poem
15 May 2004, 2:47 PM
What the fuck?
on Tripping Through A Paper Square by Shardik
15 May 2004, 3:05 PM
guff
on The Unseen by cuddlytiger17
15 May 2004, 4:57 PM
This is quite sick.
I'm sorry you have to deal with this.
And zodiac, those pictures were absolutely disgusting, did you really have to?
I'm sorry you have to deal with this.
And zodiac, those pictures were absolutely disgusting, did you really have to?
Is this a nightmare or a bad LSD trip? Then again, I remember the time I was caught in a spiderweb in the heart of the desert in a hollow tree trunk. I was in Las Vegas and they gave me some sort of weird concoction to drink and when I woke up I was out in the Nevada desert. Sound familiar?
TOLKEIN IS DEAD. Unless you are Tolkein frozen cryogenically within minutes of death and then subsequently revived, which you are plainly not, please refrain from appropriating images, motifs and names (tinuviel) from The Lord of The Rings. Otherwise go to one of the multitudinous fanfic sites where you can write about gimli assraping an elf.
Thank you
Thank you
on tribute by francis nor capule
16 May 2004, 7:52 AM
Read the masters. Learn about them so that you can forget later.
on and the world evolves by peaceseeker
16 May 2004, 11:59 AM
"live and love inside my universe" sounds like an anglophone Catullus on a bad day.
The whole thing seems a quasi-religious litany to some weird semi-deified entity known as "you." However "you" is most certainly not human because "you" is unable to air "your"m pain in reality. Then again "you" is also not omnipotent because "you" is not the one in whose universe the "living and loving" is done.
Please explain who this mysterious "you" is.
Thank you
The whole thing seems a quasi-religious litany to some weird semi-deified entity known as "you." However "you" is most certainly not human because "you" is unable to air "your"m pain in reality. Then again "you" is also not omnipotent because "you" is not the one in whose universe the "living and loving" is done.
Please explain who this mysterious "you" is.
Thank you
on One More Mile by marvelis
16 May 2004, 12:12 PM
ClichéééééééééééééééééÃ
on Oomphless by shwenatjadeflower
16 May 2004, 7:04 PM
Nono
Drop all of the last line except the first and last word. Then capitalize the last word
Drop all of the last line except the first and last word. Then capitalize the last word
on Title by large_geese
19 May 2004, 7:35 PM
Marvelous, stupendous, and bad.
on leaving by elizabethann
19 May 2004, 7:37 PM
fine
does this rhyme?
does this rhyme?
on Unwed by gilded in gold
19 May 2004, 8:24 PM
This title means: "Covered in gold, in gold"
I'm sure any monkey with some caffein and refrigerator letter-magnets could do better.
Here's a 6 so you don't hurt yourself
I'm sure any monkey with some caffein and refrigerator letter-magnets could do better.
Here's a 6 so you don't hurt yourself
on Sonnet Eighteen by devilishnutcase
19 May 2004, 7:40 PM
I could compare you to a summerâs day,
But see, you are far hotter and too sweet,
And summer is quite transient; will not stay
And after parting, leaves no one in heat.
Sometimes the pleasures in a summerâs glow
Leave one too lonely in their warmth too numb,
Without another heart that one can know
And in the night it fades to gloom and glum.
But see, your warmth and beauty shine a ray
That but grows sweeter in the thrill of night,
And leaves one yet in heat when youâre away,
And ever so your glory will bloom bright.
For you will shine, eternal as a star,
When these lines are forgotten as most are.
But see, you are far hotter and too sweet,
And summer is quite transient; will not stay
And after parting, leaves no one in heat.
Sometimes the pleasures in a summerâs glow
Leave one too lonely in their warmth too numb,
Without another heart that one can know
And in the night it fades to gloom and glum.
But see, your warmth and beauty shine a ray
That but grows sweeter in the thrill of night,
And leaves one yet in heat when youâre away,
And ever so your glory will bloom bright.
For you will shine, eternal as a star,
When these lines are forgotten as most are.