on After the ice season ~ shamelessly lewd revision by zodiac
10 May 2004, 5:19 PM
Very ephemeral, but still grounded in reality.
Good, especially with the natural rhymes
There's a palpable but faint feeling feeling here of Fitzgerald's:
"A book of verses underneath the bough
A jug of wine, a loaf of bread, and thou
Beside me singing in the wilderness
And wilderness is paradise enow."
Good, especially with the natural rhymes
There's a palpable but faint feeling feeling here of Fitzgerald's:
"A book of verses underneath the bough
A jug of wine, a loaf of bread, and thou
Beside me singing in the wilderness
And wilderness is paradise enow."
on Fourteen Years by impert&ent
11 May 2004, 8:26 PM
Though the last three stanzas are good, the "Sparkbook" appellations make me think this poem should be entitles "14 ways of looking at Bow'ls"
on some deleted poem
11 May 2004, 8:13 PM
Now I've got to hand it to you. Anyone who's second on the recent list with a ranker average of over 6 is worth something.
Although I fail to see in this anything that would sound semi-decent only when accompanied by a guitar.
Therefore: Bow'ls.
But -10-
Although I fail to see in this anything that would sound semi-decent only when accompanied by a guitar.
Therefore: Bow'ls.
But -10-
on some deleted poem
11 May 2004, 6:33 PM
You sound like a combination between a drunk and a bad stand-up comedian
on some deleted poem
11 May 2004, 7:01 PM
Oh, and, because this word has amused me so much:
Bow'ls
Bow'ls
on Highschool in My Head by MacFrantic
11 May 2004, 7:03 PM
Bow'ls
on What You Give by NoSage
11 May 2004, 7:04 PM
Bow'ls
on Style / Ffordd by Nicholas Jones
11 May 2004, 7:33 PM
Pam wyt ty'n sgrifennu'n gymraeg? Naill ai yn Gymraeg neu yn Saenseg, mae dy ysgrifen heb dull a heb pwynt. (Does ddim pwynt sgrifennu fel twpsyn)
ond....Pam lai?
ond....Pam lai?
on Style / Ffordd by Nicholas Jones
11 May 2004, 7:36 PM
Samuel Becket dit qu'ecrire en français
le permit d'ecrire sans style.
Eh bien, je ne parle pas tres bien français,
Donc il me faudra une autre langue seconde pour
Mettre sa theorie à la preuve:
Voyez-vous, il n'y a guère style là :
Moins qu'en "Waiting for Godot"
le permit d'ecrire sans style.
Eh bien, je ne parle pas tres bien français,
Donc il me faudra une autre langue seconde pour
Mettre sa theorie à la preuve:
Voyez-vous, il n'y a guère style là :
Moins qu'en "Waiting for Godot"
on Haiku Gymraeg by Nicholas Jones
11 May 2004, 8:44 PM
Mae dy haiku yn dda
on Say the Word 'Trousers' Without Laughing by Nicholas Jones
11 May 2004, 8:48 PM
Try Trowsus yn Gymraeg
on Say the Word 'Trousers' Without Laughing by Nicholas Jones
11 May 2004, 8:48 PM
Try Trowsus yn Gymraeg
on Dial Tone by cuddlytiger17
12 May 2004, 2:38 PM
This is a lot better! Is this an old one or a new one?
on The Embrowning by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I.
12 May 2004, 3:49 PM
jesus
on some deleted poem
13 May 2004, 12:57 PM
Yes, but that's what happens when you stay on this site too long.
on By Now by Lie2MePinnochio
13 May 2004, 12:59 PM
I like gnarly.
on Ze German Poetry by Stephen Robins
13 May 2004, 1:02 PM
I sink zat you vould be better usingg ze S for ze th sound at ze end off "youth"
on some deleted poem
13 May 2004, 1:03 PM
Did you get copy-paste-happy? Did you get a siezure and hit ctrl-c and then ctrl-v repeatedly?
-no vote-
-no vote-
Especially good rhymes