regarding some deleted poem...	<~> 167.206.181.179	21-Apr-04/12:40 PM
i think you can do better than to mix the quaintness of the inversions with straight subject/verb/object.
Re: War Begins on Tuesday by Nicholas Jones	ggawrysi 147.9.151.22	21-Apr-04/12:42 PM
poems are not a good medium for political views... at least in my humble opinion...
Re: Crucifixion by Mr Pig	ggawrysi 147.9.151.22	21-Apr-04/12:45 PM
what happened to 5-7-5? 4-7-6 is new to me...
Re: something by sk8rs_rule_all	ggawrysi 147.9.151.22	21-Apr-04/12:46 PM
please don't use IM language in poetry... "ur" made me cringe
Re: The Conqueror Worm by zodiac	some deleted user 67.165.254.252	21-Apr-04/1:01 PM
Zodiac, you are such a nitwit. Zoetrope is Francis Ford Coppolas (you probably have no idea who he is) on-line workshop for screenplays, flash fiction, poetry, flash fiction on and on. And as a matter of fact you smug child, I have been published several times, ever heard of NFG? didn't think so. grow up stop being such a little arse. And you are a fool if you don't think agents freqent these sites, obviously you are not a serious writer, just a poser.
Re: The Conqueror Worm by zodiac	some deleted user 67.165.254.252	21-Apr-04/1:07 PM
this souns like something you wrote while on drugs.
Re: Ravings of a dreamer by SupremeDreamer	some deleted user 67.165.254.252	21-Apr-04/1:21 PM
blah blah blah
regarding some deleted poem...	some deleted user 67.165.254.252	21-Apr-04/1:23 PM
to long
Re: pain like mine by xunitedx	some deleted user 67.165.254.252	21-Apr-04/1:25 PM
beautiful and sad.
Re: Thaw by <~>	Shuushin 147.154.235.53	21-Apr-04/2:09 PM
I like swollen and welling together.
Re: Thaw by <~>	nentwined 66.92.28.14	21-Apr-04/2:20 PM
velevt. must needs add spellcheckerthingamyisthing. :/ I like "bonsai'd mountains" but don't see how it really fits. I want that in a poem all its own. I like the image and feeling overall, though. Oddly, tumefying did not mean at all what I was guessing it would.
Re: Thaw by <~>	<~> 167.206.181.179	21-Apr-04/2:35 PM
i have to go to a work-related activity right now, but i will be back. richa--think metaphors for nature. think parallel structures. think 'as above, so below' and all that that implies, structurally.
Re: eva by samgon	richa 81.178.249.235	21-Apr-04/3:51 PM
make your topography mine? Is that from the geographer's book of seduction.
regarding some deleted poem...	richa 81.178.249.235	21-Apr-04/4:02 PM
I think you are experimenting with line breaks here. I think the sentences need to be shorter (or perhaps you have just missed out some of the punctuation). As it stands this rambles a bit.
Re: The Negro by Everyone	richa 81.178.249.235	21-Apr-04/4:10 PM
Good God Lydia, I know you lean towards the right, but giving this -10- is taking things a little far!
Re: perfection show by halofriendly	Shuushin 207.5.211.177	21-Apr-04/5:45 PM
has a very sweet, if cryptic, feel. I'd like to see it formatted slightly different, but the content is fine.
regarding some deleted poem...	Blindpoetry 68.106.171.15	21-Apr-04/5:51 PM
8 - 2 - 3? For some reason, I thought haikus were 5 - 7 - 5...
regarding some deleted poem...	Modulo 129.65.136.199	21-Apr-04/5:52 PM
So... what are your rules for haiku?
regarding some deleted poem...	Modulo 129.65.136.199	21-Apr-04/5:53 PM
Is this haiku? I have no idea anymore. 'Haiku' is just a word.
Re: Bob Jones Walked the Biscuits by Modulo	zodiac 152.30.44.39	21-Apr-04/5:54 PM
metahaiku (Meta-Ku) by ex0teric One, two, three, four, five Now you must count to seven Then the first, again Metametahaiku (Meta-Ku) by -=Dark_Angel=- Haikus are easy. A first-class dunce could write one About writing one. This is Bad (Free verse) by newagepoet2000 This is bad haiku Bad bad bad bad bad bad bad Very very bad i love this shit (Haiku) by Yatasuma I write haikus be- Cause they are easy, only take 30 seconds Can we all agree the Meta-Ku is tapped out? Yes, we can.