Re: do androids dream? by nentwined	Shuushin 147.154.235.53	22-Apr-04/6:59 AM
yes Rachel, they dream of electric sheep. A nicely encapsulated thought - and it rhymes; it must be true.
Re: Biography I (1996) by halofriendly	Shuushin 207.5.211.177	21-Apr-04/5:54 PM
the ending could have been very special I think, after such an engaging start. Something needs to happen there, after the "but..." (even if you have to make it up) and please - no talk of suicide; rather some event, or perhaps a statement of altered awareness, a re-union, somehting.
regarding some deleted poem...	zodiac 152.30.44.39	21-Apr-04/5:58 PM
Not only is this utterly ungrammatical but... Well, that's it, really.
Re: Wife beater t-shirt by bondjedi	halofriendly 4.159.131.212	21-Apr-04/5:58 PM
Very sad...good, simplistic imagery.
regarding some deleted poem...	Blindpoetry 68.106.171.15	21-Apr-04/5:59 PM
wow, please explain your logic towards this haiku! only two lines 7 - 6 - ?? Whoa... I must be trippin'
Re: Spring Haiku by Staika	halofriendly 4.159.131.212	21-Apr-04/5:59 PM
VERY good imagery
Re: marlon by bearhead	tadpole 4.228.183.62	21-Apr-04/6:00 PM
nice symbolism
Re: American Haiku 2 by memorybabe	halofriendly 4.159.131.212	21-Apr-04/6:34 PM
Did you spell "Des Moines" as one word on purpose?
Re: **The Therapist** by scitz	halofriendly 4.159.131.212	21-Apr-04/6:41 PM
I have definitely had this kind of experience in a counseling session before...wow.
regarding some deleted poem...	some deleted user 67.165.254.252	21-Apr-04/6:56 PM
I am giving this a 10 for two reasons- this has got to be the best title I have seen in ages- you have the balls to poke fun at religion/the lord. Fantastic.
regarding some deleted poem...	some deleted user 67.165.254.252	21-Apr-04/6:58 PM
great last line.
Re: The Flame by Fire_is_cool	some deleted user 67.165.254.252	21-Apr-04/7:00 PM
hey, this has something to it. Not sure what it is. Ilike the shortness and the despair of it. keep at it.
Re: Quintus: Lesson 1 by richa	Shuushin 147.154.235.53	22-Apr-04/7:02 AM
Tasty. Tasty like delicous little fishes.
Re: In Gold Leaf by bearhead	JohnnyRocker 170.224.224.123	21-Apr-04/8:51 PM
the whole Church isn't warped. :)
Re: 8 or 9 by tadpole	fluffigrbl11 4.138.24.42	22-Apr-04/12:17 AM
cute, but the rocks & the pleases kinda throw me.
Re: The Negro by Everyone	wFraser Allonby Q.C.w 195.157.153.253	22-Apr-04/1:22 AM
This is the best poem I have read for ages. Is this a collaborative effort? It's absolutely superb. I admire the economy of language. SupremeDreamer should take note. He travails; His anfractuous metacarpals impinge upon the alluvium, His cauterized and atramentous integument is begrimed with feculence: He's besmirched. -10-
Re: Fulfillment by JohnnyRocker	-=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. 81.154.19.210	22-Apr-04/2:27 AM
The Baker's Apprentice (Free verse) by -=Dark_Angel=- On this warm summer night, as I cruise effortlessly down this country road, the stars shimmering off the black hood of my car, I pause and reflect on the majesty of the universe. In the quiet solitude of this smooth endless road, I ponder creation and realize purpose. With escape from the noise of this world, the silence has made all things clear. I am here to serve my Baker. And as the cool breeze whisks at my cheeks, I am at peace.
Re: Ignorance by JohnnyRocker	zodiac 67.240.155.161	22-Apr-04/6:07 AM
- "Here is a list of people gayer than me: Simon LeBon, Paul Simon, Carly Simon, all the actors in the film Simon Birch, you." - Simon Cowell
Re: Quintus: Lesson 1 by richa	zodiac 67.240.155.161	22-Apr-04/6:22 AM
Some of the punctuation is a little awry. For what it's worth: His mind withdraws, like the tongue, too far back to swallow the water of a lake, green as moss. 'What colour would you prefer, you must drink' says the tutor. 'make it the pale blue I know as water.' 'but pale blue is the sky; green is the eye of the sycamore that looks down on your lake. Drink, for you can see the fishes.' Otherwise, ace.
Re: do androids dream? by nentwined	richa 81.178.255.242	22-Apr-04/6:48 AM
Is didacticism still bad? What is poetry that is not didactic, impartial? Is poetry not creeping didacticism? I'll give you an -8-, I would give you more if this was decentthoughtranker.com