| Re: do androids dream? by nentwined |
-=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. 131.111.212.215 |
22-Apr-04/10:21 AM |
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"The question 'Can machines think?' is as ill-posed and uninteresting as the question 'Can submarines swim?'" - Edsger Dijkstra
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| Re: Oh boo by Modulo |
nentwined 66.92.28.14 |
22-Apr-04/11:32 AM |
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| Re: The Negro by Everyone |
-=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. 131.111.212.215 |
22-Apr-04/7:25 AM |
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Complete genius. However, I would recommend changing "He's soiled" to "He soils". -9-
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| Re: Quintus: Lesson 1 by richa |
Fear of Garbage 156.63.85.15 |
22-Apr-04/7:33 AM |
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nice. are there going to be more lessons or is this a one time thing?
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| Re: Biography I (1996) by halofriendly |
Fear of Garbage 156.63.85.15 |
22-Apr-04/7:36 AM |
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the beginning is what the rest of this should be like.
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| Re: Biography I (1996) by halofriendly |
wFraser Allonby Q.C.w 195.157.153.253 |
22-Apr-04/7:38 AM |
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IT IS HEREBY DECREED THAT:
1. The phrase "five-star classy guy" is ferociously redolent of Milton Keynes circa 1988;
2. The phrase "pet peeve" is frighteningly reminiscent of Grimsby circa 1992;
3. The phrase "my self-esteem fluctuates" is disturbingly evocative of Hull circa 1998.
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| Re: The Negro by Everyone |
Fear of Garbage 156.63.85.15 |
22-Apr-04/7:40 AM |
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nice, but I do have a couple problems. Some of the rhymes sound forced and the ending is nothing special.
however, that jolting sensation? Where you smoothly rhyme two long lines, then go abruptly short? Don't change that.
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| Re: in the hands by halofriendly |
wFraser Allonby Q.C.w 195.157.153.253 |
22-Apr-04/7:42 AM |
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"You want to smear excrement all
over
me and my mom, but
there is none to be found
at this hour."
But seriously ... I don't understand the idea of "smearing sunshine".
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| Re: The Negro by Everyone |
zodiac 67.240.155.161 |
22-Apr-04/7:44 AM |
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A dullard;
Widely thought to have an enormous knob,
Picks his teeth with a dried corncob:
He's coloured.
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| Re: untitled by halofriendly |
wFraser Allonby Q.C.w 195.157.153.253 |
22-Apr-04/7:45 AM |
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Is this poem based on your own personal experience?
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| regarding some deleted poem... |
Fear of Garbage 156.63.85.15 |
22-Apr-04/7:47 AM |
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| regarding some deleted poem... |
edpeterson 68.79.24.84 |
22-Apr-04/7:53 AM |
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| Re: The Conqueror Worm by zodiac |
Fear of Garbage 156.63.85.15 |
22-Apr-04/7:54 AM |
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Zodiac, this is so weird. When did you write this? April 21, huh? I guess it must have been shortly before my Tribute To Edgar Allen Poe...that's a pretty fucking weird coincidence.
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| Re: perfection show by halofriendly |
-=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. 131.111.212.215 |
22-Apr-04/8:02 AM |
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Jesu's Sandals are +2 against Ogres. I doubt you could afford them.
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| Re: perfection show by halofriendly |
wFraser Allonby Q.C.w 195.157.153.253 |
22-Apr-04/8:05 AM |
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Hello Clara!
Welcome to Poemranker!
Thanks for posting such a great poem!
A/S/L?
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| Re: The Negro by Everyone |
-=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. 212.219.223.37 |
22-Apr-04/8:12 AM |
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The Rajah's Morning Movement by -=Dark_Angel=-
He strains;
His royal fruity gas is followed
By remains of what he last night swallowed:
Chilled monkey brains.
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| Re: Bob Jones Walked the Biscuits by Modulo |
Shuushin 147.154.235.53 |
22-Apr-04/8:22 AM |
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SEE - now thats a finish. Nicely done.
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| regarding some deleted poem... |
nentwined 66.92.183.34 |
22-Apr-04/8:35 AM |
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very cute :)
yes, succumb and come feels off.
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| regarding some deleted poem... |
nentwined 66.92.183.34 |
22-Apr-04/8:49 AM |
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| regarding some deleted poem... |
some deleted user 67.165.254.252 |
22-Apr-04/10:04 AM |
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