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Fear of Garbage 156.63.85.17 |
15-Apr-04/10:40 AM |
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This is so much better than the last thing I read of yours.
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Fear of Garbage 156.63.85.17 |
15-Apr-04/10:41 AM |
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I guess that was kind of a backhanded compliment.
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horus8 24.130.214.180 |
15-Apr-04/11:18 AM |
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Incredibly boring, but well written. 8
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| Re: On A Cliff by colndodg |
horus8 24.130.214.180 |
15-Apr-04/11:19 AM |
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An aluminum spoon in a hurricane. 4
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horus8 24.130.214.180 |
15-Apr-04/11:19 AM |
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horus8 24.130.214.180 |
15-Apr-04/11:20 AM |
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| Re: Dear M Foucault, or, How I knew our relationship was doomed by zodiac |
horus8 24.130.214.180 |
15-Apr-04/11:41 AM |
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A Skilfully Skilless skillet. 10!
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| Re: On A Cliff by colndodg |
edpeterson 68.79.22.21 |
15-Apr-04/11:49 AM |
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rife with cliche. cold as ice. forest for the trees. beg for forgiveness, pray for rain. I realize that this was probably intentional, as the whole poem is about "taking that leap" off the cliff, but still, it is hard to read so many without cringing a little. 6
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edpeterson 68.79.22.21 |
15-Apr-04/11:55 AM |
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I think it works well. reminds me a bit of "Growth of the Soil." Gold seed arcing against the sun. I really do not know anything about this, but I like the way you take me there. 8
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| Re: Metaphorically Challenged by Enkidu |
edpeterson 68.79.22.21 |
15-Apr-04/11:58 AM |
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| Re: Riding High On My Ignore List by horus8 |
some deleted user 68.66.196.168 |
15-Apr-04/12:14 PM |
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Sorry, I just don't know this scene. No comment. No offense.
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| Re: Tales From The Outhouse by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. |
edpeterson 68.79.22.21 |
15-Apr-04/12:47 PM |
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this by far is the funniest page i have read on this site....yet. priceless.
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| Re: Tales From The Outhouse by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. |
edpeterson 68.79.22.21 |
15-Apr-04/12:48 PM |
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and i didnt even read the poem
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some deleted user 68.66.196.168 |
15-Apr-04/1:05 PM |
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Hauntingly pianful. Just enough said, not too much. Otherwise it could turn into another love/pain cliche. Just right!
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edpeterson 68.79.22.21 |
15-Apr-04/1:35 PM |
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the structure of the physical words on the page makes this impossible to read.
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wilco 24.176.102.131 |
15-Apr-04/3:29 PM |
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Beautiful. Especially for those of us who live in TN.
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| Re: Riding High On My Ignore List by horus8 |
wilco 24.176.102.131 |
15-Apr-04/3:41 PM |
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I don't really get a lot of it either, but it's funny as hell.
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| Re: The Price You Pay by Fear of Garbage |
Bachus 24.130.214.180 |
15-Apr-04/3:47 PM |
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I've collapsed a lung. Did you know that they'll refill on their own a week or so as long as you don't DIE first from fucking pneumonia.
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| Re: The Idea of Fusion at the Beach (After Wallace Stevens) by coffeespoons |
Bachus 24.130.214.180 |
15-Apr-04/3:48 PM |
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Bachus 24.130.214.180 |
15-Apr-04/3:49 PM |
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fuck, you need a helmet to eat yogurt.
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