| Re: when do dreams fade? by francis nor capule |
Bachus 24.130.214.180 |
16-Apr-04/12:36 PM |
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Bachus 24.130.214.180 |
16-Apr-04/12:52 PM |
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An unpleasant slice of time. That's what I'll behaving.
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| Re: forgetful dyke by elizabethann |
Bachus 24.130.214.180 |
15-Apr-04/3:58 PM |
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Odds are you'll go from SMOKING TO CUTTING TO THE CANNERY. I've never seen any one describe smoking in a more exquisitely neither here nor there way ever. That deserves a fucking three. here's an idea... take your wallet chain and hang yourself from it with an entire pack of cigarettes puffing away from your twat... maybe that'll get your ten bucks back and a mustache ride from the mariachi with the guitar, and your dad to buy you a life...
If you didn't have some image of curt cobain wedged so far up your ass that you can vaguely here the muddy banks of the wishka eminating from your eyebrow piercing I bet you'd be even fucking COOLER?
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edpeterson 68.79.22.21 |
15-Apr-04/6:09 PM |
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fuck, you need a helmet to eat yogurt.
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edpeterson 68.79.22.21 |
15-Apr-04/6:16 PM |
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I have a mouse with a little scrolling wheel in the center. For a poem of this caliber, I can only vote by closing my eyes and spinning it back and forth an arbitrary number of times.
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| Re: horus8 accepts black cock for cash by King Abdullah II |
edpeterson 68.79.22.21 |
15-Apr-04/7:07 PM |
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if you are going to write a pohm about sumbody , at lest try to make it funny.
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capachijim 24.168.25.13 |
15-Apr-04/8:39 PM |
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| Re: Chocolate Rabbit Ears & Gay Sex by Bachus |
wFraser Allonby Q.C.w 195.157.153.253 |
16-Apr-04/1:34 AM |
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| Re: Whose God? by elizabethann |
-=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. 81.154.19.210 |
16-Apr-04/3:21 AM |
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"Are we all
children of a
God?"
Yes.
"Yes?"
Yes.
"Which God,"
Jesu.
"Whose God?"
The God of the Israelites.
"Does religion matter"
Yes. Yes it does.
"Or do we just
Need faith
In one higher being"
No. You need faith in Jesu.
"And if we don't believe
What happens?"
You go to hell.
"Are we condemned by
Believers and followers?"
You are condemned by Jesu.
"And if so
What kind of God
Do you have?"
An 18th level cleric with Invisibility, the Helmet of True Seeing, and the Amulet of Transubstantiation.
"A just one?"
God is just.
"Or an insensitive, impure
Conformist?"
God is not insensitive, He is not impure, He is not a conformist.
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| Re: Metaphorically Challenged by Enkidu |
Shuushin 147.154.235.52 |
16-Apr-04/6:34 AM |
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yep - thats a goodun.
But I wonder at the thoughts in your brain that would make tiny children sick.
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| Re: after class by ThePariahDog |
some deleted user 128.186.40.218 |
16-Apr-04/7:26 AM |
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I envision your professor seducing you during class, asking you to stay after, whipping you with her pointer, wrapping her sexy legs around you...
and then you wake up...
next to me.
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| Re: One or the Same by Enkidu |
Enkidu 204.98.23.96 |
16-Apr-04/7:38 AM |
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If you figure it out, please say so and I will go to your first poem and comment if you're right.
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some deleted user 68.66.196.168 |
16-Apr-04/7:39 AM |
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Welcome to Poemranker. I see you've met the wolves. I must admit your poems lack much of the intrigue and room for personal interporetation I enjoy so much in poetry, but this one is better. You're starting to show something beyond the words.
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some deleted user 68.66.196.168 |
16-Apr-04/7:44 AM |
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First verse is good, but it looses focus after that, seems like you can't stay on track, which,I guess is how love, but not poetry, works.
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Enkidu 204.98.23.96 |
16-Apr-04/7:46 AM |
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"LIKE old folks?"
Does this imply that the narrator doesn't consider themself aged?
This question only applies if the narrator is, in fact, old.
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edpeterson 68.79.22.21 |
16-Apr-04/8:08 AM |
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spin, spin, spin ......3
AWful
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| Re: Diptych by coffeespoons |
edpeterson 68.79.22.21 |
16-Apr-04/8:55 AM |
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I don't care what category you put it in. I think it is great. I just love it.
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| Re: One or the Same by Enkidu |
Enkidu 204.98.23.57 |
16-Apr-04/11:45 AM |
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There once was poet, a cheat
Who thought he was good on his feet
So he looked and he found
That his distance from ground
Made he journey to hell most complete
(Hee Hee, Ha, Ho, Hah, Ah hah, Heh, Oh ho, *sigh* Not funny)
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| Re: John K Rhyming Dictionary For Beginners by Everyone |
Bachus 24.130.214.180 |
16-Apr-04/12:54 PM |
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| Re: when do dreams fade? by francis nor capule |
some deleted user 68.66.196.168 |
16-Apr-04/1:36 PM |
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At first I expected this to end as a slur on maudlin feelings being gushed without any preparation, but now I see I'll have to write that verse myself.
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