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xxx 68.165.172.185 |
28-Jan-04/11:08 AM |
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Got to watch out for the Blue Jays!
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| Re: Spark by penguin fiend |
some deleted user 208.25.247.107 |
27-Jan-04/6:51 PM |
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you have major talent i wish i wrote like you do....not a whole lot has appealed to me yet but yours seems to be real.
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| Re: lets talk by penguin fiend |
some deleted user 208.25.247.107 |
27-Jan-04/6:52 PM |
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| Re: I LOVE YOUR HATE AND RIDICULE by http://janglingjack |
some deleted user 208.25.247.107 |
27-Jan-04/7:08 PM |
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your right most poets are assholes....i dont consider myself an ass hole....but i also dont honestly consider myself a poet....go figure?
i think your shit is true....
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| Re: Dr. Skellington by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. |
some deleted user 208.28.223.34 |
27-Jan-04/8:04 PM |
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I really loved this poem it brightened up the rest of my day not having to believe all poets are tight asses
Heres a 10 for you....i usually dont throw those around!!!!
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Shuushin 207.5.211.177 |
27-Jan-04/9:30 PM |
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-=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. 131.111.212.215 |
28-Jan-04/12:59 AM |
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| Re: The Thrapper by You are a fat fucker |
cleverdevice 212.219.142.161 |
28-Jan-04/5:47 AM |
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Flasheart: Ever felt the wind in your hair, Blackadder?
Blackadder: No...
(phrrrt)
Flasheart: He just has, WOOF WOOF!
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| Re: Fool by ez2replace |
some deleted user 208.28.223.78 |
28-Jan-04/7:29 AM |
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i really like this one id give it a 10+ but youll have to setle with a mere 10
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| Re: Ghost by lastobelus |
some deleted user 64.252.90.29 |
28-Jan-04/7:39 AM |
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I weep for you, who will not thrill at the ions purging before the cleanse.
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| Re: Ghost by lastobelus |
zodiac 67.240.192.73 |
28-Jan-04/7:59 AM |
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Pimple. I'm surprised at you. Don't worry, my last was an utter flop.
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| Re: Come off with me Carly back into the city by zodiac |
Lenore 64.252.107.161 |
28-Jan-04/8:55 AM |
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<keeps me fellow> I think mellow would work better here. Nice and depressing. 8
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| Re: Tomorrow by sykes |
zodiac 67.240.211.74 |
28-Jan-04/9:35 AM |
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zodiac 67.240.211.74 |
28-Jan-04/9:45 AM |
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If there's one thing rosicrucians do well it's write good hells. You and Michael Wigglesworth.
"smoke up the moon" - Hell yeah! Smoke it up!
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zodiac 67.240.155.182 |
28-Jan-04/10:05 AM |
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You understand? You're not going to get a fair representation of what we think of your thought, imagery, etc., because it looks like misspelled kid writing in squiggle pen. Half of poetry is just projecting the illusion of being a real writer.
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| regarding some deleted poem... |
zodiac 67.240.155.182 |
28-Jan-04/10:06 AM |
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Before you post a bunch of stuff that's just like the poems you deleted, consider using capital I's and punctuation, which are still standard parts of English grammar and have the bonus of making your poems look more like poems and less like hack notebook scribblings.
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| Re: Belabourin' Jack by middenHeap |
-=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. 163.1.146.87 |
28-Jan-04/10:51 AM |
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A deeply, deeply lewd piece.
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xxx 68.165.172.185 |
28-Jan-04/11:09 AM |
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Slow down... your going to fast. It's alright to use a spell checker sometimes.
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xxx 68.165.172.185 |
28-Jan-04/11:10 AM |
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andrewjthomas 192.150.10.200 |
28-Jan-04/11:15 AM |
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um, cinquain is 2,4,6,8,2
not the meter you have here
please use form properly if you are going to use it
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