Re: Once the moon turned me into a hairy vagina by horus8	titan69 213.48.74.114	26-Jan-04/1:38 PM
are you all mad ITS SHIT!!!!!!!! Beter not say to much might up set nobby agane
regarding some deleted poem...	xxx 68.165.172.185	26-Jan-04/1:25 PM
Rather BLEEK.
Re: Make Love to Me by drumrgirl30	titan69 213.48.74.114	26-Jan-04/1:29 PM
I would do if you didnt look like an ape? Just kidding 9/10
regarding some deleted poem...	Goad 217.82.0.76	26-Jan-04/1:55 PM
yeah whatever. And my buddy Bob has a god, the Glorious Jenny, who is a 4 billion year old vagina that is the size of a galaxy and has a yeast infection, and if you don't believe in her you have to spend a billion years in the Twat of Punishment. A religion that actually had any intrinsic value would not need to try to frighten people into believing.
Re: The Ballade of Hollis Browne by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I.	Goad 217.82.0.76	26-Jan-04/2:01 PM
you will burn in hell for blaspheming the born-again bob, you infidel goat.
regarding some deleted poem...	Shardik 24.126.116.54	26-Jan-04/2:06 PM
Stoic.
Re: The Ballade of Hollis Browne by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I.	Shardik 24.126.116.54	26-Jan-04/2:09 PM
Somewhere in the distance, squatters in a river, are washing napkins for the lord of the manor, beating the socks on the rocks to afford retainers. while their children splash ecoli and dream of saucing an eggroll.
Re: Sequence by http://mulberryfairy	Goad 217.82.0.76	26-Jan-04/2:14 PM
This totally works for me, just as it is. But they booted me out of Eratosphere.
Re: The Ballade of Hollis Browne by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I.	richa 81.178.208.56	26-Jan-04/2:31 PM
All the mathematics and crude jokes in the world will never make you bob dylan. I suggest you take your place in the commoners roome!!!
regarding some deleted poem...	unouluvme 66.167.71.91	26-Jan-04/2:36 PM
BTW, Mr andrewjthomas, do you really think that your piss poem is better than mine???
Re: Captain Cannibal by Lenore	Shardik 24.126.116.54	26-Jan-04/2:38 PM
Have you seen "The Fog"? (This is where dark bagel comes along and goes "I am fog!!! blargh!" and then toots the horn on the side of his ass wagon).
Re: Reconstruction by andrewjthomas	zodiac 152.30.23.24	26-Jan-04/2:40 PM
The passage "while this deconstruction of residential zoning half-burnt brick and mortar shell shining," doesn't form a clause. What happens "while"? I would understand if you meant for it to be like that, with the abruptness of "rebuild" and all, but if not it needs a verb. I would also take the "sweet" out of "sweet train wreck" and even (really controlling unsolicited advice here) drop the "and" from the beginning of that line and the "The" before sirens. It's really good otherwise. Don't think I criticized so much because I don't like it. You'll see I'm harder on the good ones.
Re: Captain Cannibal by Lenore	Goad 217.82.0.76	26-Jan-04/2:43 PM
This should be a pimple, I think.
regarding some deleted poem...	zodiac 152.30.23.24	26-Jan-04/2:44 PM
"Many tears, she shall shed," When the rankers all have read This same trite stuff as all your others On breaks from shagging their own mothers.
Re: Reconstruction by andrewjthomas	Shardik 24.126.116.54	26-Jan-04/2:45 PM
Pan handler.
regarding some deleted poem...	sonawrote 205.188.208.105	26-Jan-04/2:46 PM
Hey, Why are so many readers here HATERS? I like your work...do you have a personal site? I can show u how 2 get a free one to post your stuff on....E
Re: Sissy Faggot by Shardik	zodiac 152.30.23.24	26-Jan-04/2:52 PM
a tampon with wings? Anatomically impossible!
Re: bitch on the triple word score by middenHeap	Shardik 24.126.116.54	26-Jan-04/3:00 PM
If you soak a pretzel in urine for five hours it will swell and taste nasty.
Re: Pine by andrewjthomas	Goad 217.82.0.76	26-Jan-04/3:02 PM
Some good stuff in here. Please do a little bonsai with it. You intrigued me, but by the end I no longer gave a fuck what you were tired of. Just post the pome, not the whole worksheet for the pome.
Re: Sissy Faggot by Shardik	-=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. 131.111.212.215	26-Jan-04/3:11 PM
This is one of the best poemes on poemeranker.