<{Baba^Yaga}>
on some deleted poem
30 Oct 2003, 10:04 AM
Too vague, even for you.
That's odd? I read this same thing tattood upon
-=Dark_Angel=-'s reddening rump last week during one of our bi yearly Christian retreaties.
The reason was, of course, acute vaginal terror brought on by a future tongue disease called MAIDS.
Where did all your poems go?
someone should beat you with a spade. I'd sell tickets.
This was very sweet - Naive, but sweet. Unless you've lived through a 4 year old whom you have to chase through a store - you've no idea - and the sweet sentimentality doesn't last...
As for Doylum's comments - if you're only lasting 2 min 12 sec. or bangin someone who does - they've drugs for that now - you may want to check into it...
My idea of a late night toss. 10!
great start!!! but then you made an arse of it??
you little wanker!that my mom...
Hmmm?
well?
uh?
ok then . . .
10!- for throwing Cro-Magnon to a yet, more primordial form!
1st critique all over again, & then some... if only you knew!!!?(sp.)
I'm cauterized & hard...you busy later?
I'm milked, like your Halloween costume! My blood tastes more like a fine blend of absinthe & moosehead
the subject choice is not original; love fire/fire burns.
But nevertheless I think you writing has quite a lively voice, though somewhat archaic.
When I was a child, before I could use a keyboard, I used to replace song lyrics with funny alternatives (love/glove).
I sometimes wonder what I would have done had I known of poemranker and being able to type then.
gizard on a skilet,
yummmmmmm.
wat about the bottle rockets?