blues361
on September 11, 2001: That Day by blues361
19 Oct 2003, 2:19 PM
Okay, but just to let you know, I'm a girl. ;)
So, so perfect.
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I like the first stanza as it flows around strangeness and a subtle rhyme.
I just have nary an idea of what the hell this is about. Was he doing something his pans becuase it rhymes with hands??
defending against, maybe?
it may be disjointed, but were you smoking 'dis joint, or a fatter one??
who is James - who are you, and why do I have to read about either of you??
"bequeeth" is "ea", but I think you meant "beseech", unless you were saying it as he might, presumably as wrongly as you? No idea.
to eath his own.
very nice.
A little klang, some nice mirrored sounds, unusual wordings - excellent.
I enjoyed this poeme so much that I read the whole thing.
-=Dark_Angel=-, P.I.
on You'd sell more hats, mugs, and shirts if they said... by Shardik
19 Oct 2003, 3:54 PM
P.S If you are suggesting that -=Dark_Angel=- has been voting on his own poemes in a mindless attempt to top the best list you are mistaken. Nevertheless, I do get the feeling that as of late *somebody* has been smearing my felchings with more than their fair share of anonymous votes. I do not know who. But even if I had been voting on my own secretions (which I haven't), that would merely add to the credibilty of my scores because my voting algorithm is about ten times less wrong and stupid than the average poemeranker's.
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Damn! I don't want to be there!
very nice, 7 ate 9-------naw,8.
sucksexing!
good entertainment value! oh yeah, this is free.
One of your best.
maybe I should be neutered, but this is a nice ditty!
Wow, and I mean that like WOW! Bravo, a moving piece. I'm impressed 10. and a GOLDEN Q TIP AWARD. hats off.
If you mean California? I agree passionately.