Hrmm. blessed with 7. Do you only write erotic poetry btw?

hrmm. interesting. 5

Well.. kinda lost me someplaces, then took hold of me again.. 7.

I don't know about erotic, but it's a great song. She always makes good music eh?

Chico has issues big ones

This reminds me of another story: There is fruit stand in Barcelona along La Rambla where a peculiar boy sells the strangest fruit. The boy has his own garden and works most of the week tending to it. Occassionally he goes to market to offer his produce for money and appreciation. Now some of this fruit is just plain bizarre. Some of it looks bizarre but is actually quite tasty. Some looks normal but tastes quite foul. All in all, he had over a dozen varieties ranging in flavor, appearance, nourishment, and method of consumption - for surely one removes the peel from a banana, but not a strawberry. The boy has recently developed a new type of fruit that is strange looking and very difficult to get into, but the fruit is large and the flesh )once reached) enough nourishment for several meals. But the boy forgets that the market is a large place filled with other vendors and more familiar fare why should they stop at his stall and even bother trying to deal with his peculiar fruit? Of course the locals don't stop. And it makes the boy slightly sad to be so good at creating the fruit and so mediocre at presenting and selling it ------ Incidentally I think you misunderstood the wiseman's words. He said that the concept of 'I' was an illusion, not reality. It was also reality when he got up from under his tree, rubbed his head, and gave you a good old fashioned atomic wedgie.

"if you would take the time to undertand this poem instead of ridicule it." "I think it is as original a thought as a man can have." Frank Herbert and a ton of other people wrote about consciousness with ideas similiar, or just like this, better, more effectively, and with a better understanding of the subject. Your the arrogant one my friend, you think your having a brilliant spark of genius, and you are NOT. your also avoiding explaining your claims. why abe? whats there that im too lazy to understand? whats the secret lesson or meaning in all this? CMON ABE. ive written a million poems about the mind, metaphysics, philosophy, social behavior, etc, studied these things, went into the occult, alot of study and self experimentation with drugs to test the boundries of consciousness itself.. IM NOT TALKING OUT MY ASS. im not some little turd who fails to see your genius, pull your head out your anus and stomp on me if im wrong.

So I'm not the only one who thinks about ejaculation and masturbation and sex with androids (oops, that one slipped out), and is not afraid to admit it. I give it an 8 for its ample supply of rhymes.

cute. nice ascii crosses.. i bet settle is going to do one with jesus on it, bleeding and all that in response. Did your church pat you on the back for reciting this poem? did you manage not to have a random bowel movement and get all red in the face because no one likes lethal gas being expelled in a place of holy worship, nor brown gravy dripping on the altar? --end of jokes meant to insult-- overall 7. consult settle for better ascii crosses.

A vivid picture of a place I'm sure I've been, I just can't remember when.

... did he pinch your cock with his teeth? ow.. tsk.. sexton, sometimes you post poems i like, other times, you just get me wondering if you were droped alot when your were a baby. but thats ok. 3

Better than the daddy poem. kept me on track but you need to stop getting all defensive and emotional, saying things like "im sorry you hate my poetry". I dont. I dont "hate" any piece of writing, hate is an emotion i reserve for those unlucky enough to recieve it. This is a rough draft. It has concepts laid out. Comprehension is hanging by a pinky, and the cliff has soil that tends to crumble. If you care about this poem, then get the shoe polish lady, and fucking make this shine. 6.

love is in the air, jesus being right in the middle of it.. check out my parody based on "praying for help" by crystal lane swift. its my best yet. oh yeah, 7. When I pierced your shield- huh? was she a virgin? or is this just your way of saying -i penetrated your lips-?

Not too shabby, I especially like the third stanza, the scooter...

short and simple. i also think the inversion suggestion should be utilized. though, im not sure about the message.. my first thought is: "god does not forgive. he is also sadistic, and left jesus in heaven alone." anyway, heres a 7.

And in my heart you will stay? I think you need a bit more originality But I like the part about avoiding the curve. I shall bestow a six for now, but I should hold for the rewrite Electro

Is this a back jacket summary for a Mills and Boon? If so where can I buy this superfluousative read I think it is a Mills and Boon summary isn't it? is isn't it? I think you've just separated it into smaller paragraphs haven't you? Hem? Haven't you? I was going to offer you a look at my puppies but i think you'd decline

I am damn fucking proud of myself. I think that this parody is the best one i have ever written.

hrmmm.. flames.. how many times has that one been used.. add more fuel to lit your fire.. cmon, be more creative than that. 4.

Okay bored now, fuck this -dreamers creative response: -Settle's Snake Song- stroking penis isnt fun no more, im feeling oh so sore, cockhead foreskin rubbin has become a bore, i need to go buy a motherfucking whore, i want more, than just my hand, i want more than just my tanhand strapped to my penis like a rubberband. --- heh. have fun at art school you bastage. heres an 8.