Bachus
on Padre's Gumbo by SupremeDreamer
14 Aug 2003, 8:50 PM
Weird, if you ask me.
Redrum
L2 has nine beats instead of 10.
Yep. 0
Good, but it could use an edit. 8.
Wickedly obtrusive.
Zuper.
Dark Angle
on A parking lot, a smoke, and the pleasure of being alone by thepinkbunnyofdoom
15 Aug 2003, 12:23 AM
nice little poem ya got here,
Rough calloused hands are the hands of the man who works to support her, fear not to touch.
Have you seen that movie the Goonies? 10!
well done. great emotionn.
Nylon instruments of death. 10!
Bitchin' dude. 9, but only because it was not a sonnet.
L7's a bit long i believe . 9.
Ohhhh Yeah! That's what I'm talkin' bout. Rather, what you're talking about that resonates superbly. Better than a good idea. It's a good idea well presented. 10
reading this in my head is like leaf blowers at 4 30 in the morning outside my bedroom window; out loud, like a parasite eatting away at my inner ear. dont get me wrong, its grrrreat and all, oh yeah, john k probably takes girls home and tells them how he's a published poet, shows them the web site, reads a little, plays some guitar, and as easy as... well, most girls... hes got them in bed
nice poem ambigious ampersand woman or man
haha, yep, remember zima, how bout that new bicardi silver? but id take good old fashion wild berry wine coolers any day! now thats some man on man beer!
durkl, lovely little poem here, didnt see it comming, well until it plainly came that is, then i saw it.
Well, it got a four. I couldn't quite make out the challenge. Could you be more specific? the number 8 is for my hate beyond all dates and infinite (I bet you said infinate) aint strait it's a muthafucking all scratched & crooked. In Florida I once caught a snook it's in my pants you can take a look. The eight is for the inches and the whore provides the winches that it takes to crane me out of bed. Waking up is hard to do. When all you do all day... And every day, is pure MURDER.