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Bachus on some deleted poem 6 Jul 2003, 2:49 PM
Good, now make me a sandwich.
DreamerSupreme on vacation by geewhiz1962 6 Jul 2003, 4:58 PM
looks like someone burped.. 5
DreamerSupreme on 2838 Denise Dr. Troy, Mi. by Bachus 6 Jul 2003, 2:41 PM
Well, things were great untill the dogs death lol.. 7.
geewhiz1962 on The Zen of the Pen by DreamerSupreme 6 Jul 2003, 5:18 PM
What good is a keyboard? If it spills such spew...3
some deleted user on some deleted poem 6 Jul 2003, 6:44 PM
Herr Tintagiles, you are a master at work. As I read through your pieces this is by far the finest of them all. Bravo!
OneFingerAnswer on The Zen of the Pen by DreamerSupreme 6 Jul 2003, 2:54 PM
"What good is a pen, if one knows not how to write?" I've used pens for a lot of things other than writing. Whistles to weapons the possiblities never end.
horus8 on 2838 Denise Dr. Troy, Mi. by Bachus 6 Jul 2003, 5:54 PM
I love making myself laugh.
horus8 on Ocular Photoalbum by DreamerSupreme 6 Jul 2003, 5:58 PM
Daddy, oh sweet dear daddy.
Shardik on some deleted poem 6 Jul 2003, 6:06 PM
Chopper command.
Shardik on vacation by geewhiz1962 6 Jul 2003, 6:14 PM
You act as if you've been moonlighting as a poet, and are just exhausted... Poor dear.
dmzoacan on At a hotel room in Royal Oak by horus8 6 Jul 2003, 6:32 PM
oh good god no I bet he drank the check too 10 Why don't you give me 10s anymore?? What's with this 9 bullshit?? Stop toying with me. I'm not a toy.
Jeremi B. Handrinos on some deleted poem 6 Jul 2003, 6:33 PM
lol! Bananna madness!
david on some deleted poem 6 Jul 2003, 6:44 PM
The diction is well-balanced, and the flow is pleasing. A well-crafted piece. I'd say that it would be nice to see it lengthened, but I get the distinct impression that if you were to do so, you may run the risk of losing what it currently has. (Not to say that you aren't capable; it's just that the thing seems so very delicate in its current state.) Upon reading this piece, I wonder why there isn't a 'prose' classification. 'Other' works, yes, but wouldn't it be nice to have 'prose'? Wouldn't it?
Jeremi B. Handrinos on One Lump Or Two? by OneFingerAnswer 6 Jul 2003, 7:09 PM
You're improving at these. Steady as she goes.
DreamerSupreme on some deleted poem 6 Jul 2003, 2:36 PM
hrmm.. yeah... ok.. *puffs on the meth pipe* ok, now im awake, and what about me being in the supreme court? shit, if that was true, i would shoot myself. "made poetry legal"... well.. no need, theres the first amendment. ah well.. pen.. yes.. who gives a damn about the pen you write with, its the work that gives your pen any power.. and if this is the shit that came out the pen.. then it isnt its fault, dont try to replace it. ;P Heres a 6.
richa on some deleted poem 6 Jul 2003, 2:47 PM
makes perfect sense to me pretty good, think you might be condemning yourself with your own pen though should watch out for that
OneFingerAnswer on 12673 Jalepeno ave. Chino, Ca. by Jeremi B. Handrinos 6 Jul 2003, 2:48 PM
I like this the best out of the series. Keep going by all means.
Jeremi B. Handrinos on To be titled by Horus8(Craft's Service) by thepinkbunnyofdoom 6 Jul 2003, 8:13 PM
When did you all of a sudden get crafty?
DreamerSupreme on vacation by geewhiz1962 6 Jul 2003, 5:10 PM
... this isnt worth 5.. here: 0 ;) did i forget the 1?
horus8 on One Lump Or Two? by OneFingerAnswer 6 Jul 2003, 5:51 PM
Are you missing a stanza purposely?