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on touch of the grass by david
5 Jul 2003, 1:40 PM
GQTIP AWARDE. A fine poem.
Gosh.
where'd it go, bill?
Yes!
I think I look more debonair than Jeff Goldblum, I wonder how you paste one's photo on to the the international superhighway
Not bad. But I won't rank you because of my stigma poem mutilated!
Margaret, am I a big bad bully pushing people around? You do realize that we are on the internet and that 'the' idea of 'that' has no favtual basis in a realm where the fact of that actually occuring instinctually triggers, (you're physically reacting to an unphysical situation, dramatically if I may add) in you, a need to label it. Unless of course you mean how when a sheep dog barks and the sheep obey? That's just how God made people Margaret don't be racist against my breed of creatures Margaret, for doing my job in thinning out the weak and flawed, it makes you look ridiculous. Since, in this forum of writers you can't physically do something to one another (Or can you) I mentally challenge people by any means possible verbally, passively, mannipulation, 'LIFE's magic', to get them to wake up, or shut up. I am a poet all day everyday Margaret, and I take the job seriously. Why should I have so many user names you ask? I'm sure it wouldn't be to write 5x more than one name would allow right tits and brains? It's because I write like you breathe Margaret... As much as I can. You should move on to playing mom with some newbie more your intellectual package, overnight delivery. Not a veteran of poetic battle Sweettie, You have no idea about any of my work or who I am for Christ sake. You don't even fucking know who you are yet CHILD! Bi-polar or not, 60's, beat, OliverStone, whatever... I write more passionately than you'll ever allow yourself too understand or do. Have fun here at poemranker Margaret and catagorize until you wipe your hands dilligently on the apron of your isolation spinning that ring, spinning those ideas. Just spinning.
Funny, that's for sure. You still in Africa?
bipolar disorder tends to work in cycles. If someone changes moods so quickly as that I suggest it is the cocaine not the bipolar.
Nice though. Westerners are so precious with their illnesses
'we must learn to love one another AND die'
and
'i will not go down under the ground/cos somebody tells me that deaths comin round'
just a couple of quotes with reference to this transcription
one of the best 'winge about settle' poems. There should be an award
The typical scene before a death in a movie.
some deleted user
on some deleted poem
5 Jul 2003, 12:23 PM
Yeah, I think we all wonder at times. Good poem, KF.
Good. Is it an analogy of death?
Wow. Let's see we got onomatopoeia going strong, you keep my attention for sure, and you actually made my clit hard. Good write!
I bet you never imagined that your subtext would be better than your writing Garret.
I would change "orgasmic" to organic, and lose "for food" Ending it at words.
Good Lord !
Their seems to be a distinct lack of love and mutual respect for each other here. I am not siding but am disconsolate to see such anger and hatred.
Do please try to get on I so hate confrontation, life is so short don't you think?
Super medicine.
hey rich. i'm back. and safe.
and you are more minimslist than when i left...