asimpleman
on youth in asia by suckmychucks
11 Apr 2003, 3:32 AM
why don't u hang urself.........might b something u do right
Is this about that beer add where the dude stick this girl's bag in the rubbish recepticle? I hate that add. Plus she's ugly.
who the fuck told u that poetry was for imbeciles like u?
why did the black kid cry when he had diahrehaa?>? He thot he was melting lol asl. 10;
Don't you have homework you should be doing?? A pre-algebra test to study for??
sorry to hear of your porking problem.
lesly's a fga na,e lol als
Why haiku oh you don't know. Pulling the strings on your hooded sweatshirt, pushing you out your front door, shutting it, kicking your dog, stealing loose change and valuables, opening your door, kicking you back inside, watching your dog bite you, closing the door. ta dah.
I don't want to start any blasphemous rumours but it seems that god's got a wholesome and observant sense of humour.
show more tell less, but altogether better than the last 20 poems I just read.
interesting. tired ending, do something interesting. break it up or shorten it and stick it all together. Think.
Shove lightbulbs up your ass
And then punch yourself in the abdoment
For eternity.
this is worse than fucking chopsticks
Prison rape isn't funny, despite what american mass media may have you believe. www.spr.org.
wow a poem inspired by a movie inspired by a war inspired by real events. Replace last line with "BORN..IN THE USA!!! (x10)".
Very concealed points, please enlighten me more I almost enjoyed it 6
too long
No i made a mistake by bothering to notice shiity poetry like the above
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Lower your standards and settle for what you can get.