thepinkbunnyofdoom
on bottoms up by suckmychucks
9 Apr 2003, 12:38 PM
Witty.
less-than-silent lucidity. you just can't be stopped.
got an mp3 of this one yet?
It's plagurised!
i give you a 4 on the dismount.
the chiefs sucked so bad that they inspired you to write a poem about it? that's pretty bad, you pansy-ass-haiku lovin-kansas city chiefs hatin chump. i'll give you a 1 for writing your name.
you tried this at home, didn't you? with out adult supervision? and you weren't a professional on a closed course, now were you?
i give you a 10 for plagiarizing someone elses bad spelling. chump.
what man bobs and coos? sounds like your lover is a fudge packer. i give you a 0 for not drowning.
lumpy doesnt rhyme with comfy. and you're a simpleton with a speech impediment and a sock fetish. you're gay and you're wrong for loving socks as much as you do. i'll tell you what you should do: go to a bar. get drunk. ask someone to take you home. demand sex and don't even mention your socks. dont even think to use them as a condom as i'm sure you would. i dont care how soft the tube sock is, latex works better. i give you a 2 for your psycho-sexual condition.
are you trying to be funny? i couldn't quite finish this piece of shit as the second stanza made me lose the will to live. thank you for pointing out how pointless it all is. i'd give you a 0 for connecting subject to object but it's all poinless so i will be giving nothing at this time. chump.
You're a simpleton with a speech impediment and a English Teacher fetish. You're gay and you're wrong for loving teachers as much as you do. I'll tell you what you should do: go to a bar. get drunk, ask someone to take you home, demand sex and don't even mention your English teacher. Don't even think to use him as a condom as I'm sure you would. I don't care how soft the teacher is, Scientists work better. I give you a 2 for your psycho-sexual condition.
bx--it's too bad you don't care. you express thoughts that so many are feeling, but you don't care enough about saying it to communicate it well. if you want some recognition, run spell check. it shows no respect for yourself or your audience to be so sloppy.
Piling on the Cheez Whiz, I see. Crap imagery, crap use of cliched wording. Who the hell untied you, took off the helmet, and let you down from the ceiling to write poemes, anyway?
I'm agreeing with Ranger's theory.
lunar
on Uninformed, pseudo-philosophical thoughts about existence by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I.
9 Apr 2003, 11:52 AM
its just because your you that you get so many votes and comments it seems. oh well if theres going to be a god of poemranking it may as well be someone who does seem to have intelligence of a sort
Are you in the alton college poemranker crew AS WELL? god i didnt realise how many of us were on here.
OH MY GOD I DIDNT NOT REALISE YOU WERE ACTUALLY GOOD AT WRITING this is the best thing i have ever read on this site i cant believe it -10- forevaandeva
Quite sweet. What did you do with yourself before u were on this site btw?