horus8
on Desired Height by Wulf
17 Mar 2003, 4:25 PM
Well, i will say there is some nice wordplay here, but since darwinism is alive and well and definitely going to play a part in this war too. i can only give you a 7, as a scientist, you see. Nothing personal. It's probably seven more then you've ever given me, but i shall not weep (happy hour has arrived).
Great.
I like it
very cool, i thought that haiku was a 5-7-5 thing. Someone tell if I am mistaken.
Not sure what u mean
some deleted user
on some deleted poem
18 Mar 2003, 1:13 AM
Also, Mr. LeBlancXXX or whatever your name is these days... What are you trying to prove man? That you can manipulate with people's heads all the way from RI? Is your life that boring that you feel the need to fuck up people's lives? I guess so. Perhaps you should learn how to make flamable cheese, idiot.
Bachus rides up, looking ruddy and butoxicated, "hey youifgdsvbb,vbzjysiberlsc vn Jungian terms, the inherent workings of enantiodromia within our psyche continually lead us to accessing and integrating our
shadow. Jung writes:
Everyone carries a shadow, and the less it is embodied in the individual's conscious life, the blacker and denser it is. It forms an
unconscious snag, thwarting our most well-meant intentions. he says with astraight face. hiccup, your a motherfucker aye ah stupid bum marauder a kunt poking melon fiddler hiccup...i hit command v, and pastyed some sahit above here but fuckerjiguty bastard..ha ha. get him tanya! kick him in his spokes <bachus pulls out his kale gun, but it discharges in its holster blowing kale everywhere, the horse panics and dumps him in a water barrel. Bachus leaps out trying to maintain his dignity, but he's lost his hat and salad dressing. "okay, this here town aint bigt enough for the two of <just then an asian with huge tits and an opium pipe walks by, bachus follows eagerly exp-lainimng to her the cocept behind his high tech hooves and photosynthesized pwerised super volunteering non leering gadgetry... hiccup! i like asian chicki,vc. IU*GF.d
YEAH! bachus fire a shot of kale for enfascist in the air, but his entire gone explodifies TEARING THE CLOTHESKY FROM HIS NUDITY and giving him a wiley e. coyotr look, but he mumbles somrthing about having another one recharging at home under some high prewssure sodium halide bulbs. He then does a roundoff back hand spring into0 the saloon killing a small cheery eyed and bedraggled midget, poor bastard was just delivering drinks... now look at him... all welL ROUNDS ON ME! HEY YOU GUYS WANNA HEAR SOME INGENIUS WAYS OFF SQUASHIFYING THE GRAPIES? HICCUP. but his charred bodyt and nakedness draws him suspect to there stereo typing and rascist catagorizing, bachus picks his ass and orders8 bushmills for each of him and his nect lifesky! that's right motyherfuckers this kid does it like no other all day brother word to the billyclucker?
By the way... You can thank me later for turning you onto Manly P. Hall. You need it, but i will commend you on your effort with an eight, but just know you are over complicating things dramaticaly here. 8.
Seems better this time...THAEN AGAIN, I'M COMPLETELY FUCKING HAMMERED... URP. so fuck it. make it concrete and call it kentucky. lol.
With a name like Wulf, you got a lot to live up to < bacchus sparks a joint and blows it at his computer screen> "better you then me" [lynard skynard's simple man comes on] bachus knows right then... It doesn't get better then this. he can type two handed now. lol, and old the joint with his teeth.
Beginning's okay, middle starts to shimmy a bit, but then pow. good show, could use a re-edit to get the tens though. here's an 8.
This is really good. I've done a lot of mission work in Atlantic City and it's very true to the stories of the people I've met there. Doesn't it look nice with snow on the beach? The water's actually not that bad in the middle of January.
some deleted user
on some deleted poem
18 Mar 2003, 1:08 AM
If you're e-mailing me propaganda (and you know what I am talking about), please stop. It's not funny. I would e-mail you but I've discarded your address and don't rememeber it. So, if it's you, just fucking stop.
God is was goods then in you chokie doo de in the hiccup.. last chirp pardon me. 7.i
this is impeccable though.
SWAGGER AWARDE! 10!
nice
love it.