Ray
on Suicidal thoughts by CrAzYlAdY Surukain
24 Feb 2003, 9:23 AM
The crazlady....i really like this poem! keep writing
No No No this will not do I say ! I see someone voted you off the top, how bloody rude and unfair here is 10 its a wonderful, read which makes one envisage the pif to the pip of the piece. I repudiate the fact that someone thinks a woman cannt be top.
How bloody ludicrous for heavens sake.
good poem,like it!
a powerful blend of images. bravo.
Don't do it. You need to stick around to write more poetry.
It is not worth it. Pull yourself out of your funk. Eat some chocolate, watch a comedy, go for a walk or a run--even if it is cold outside (especially if its cold outside) then write some more poems.
Suicide is a very personal decision. If ou have thought it through and feel it is the only viable option, you should go through with it.
hmmmmmm well, i say 6
Hey Jake..like i told you b4 i love this poem soo much!!
Nice..you have a real talent....
I luved this poem when u first showed me it.
I think the poem is bloody good. so there.
Like it,Esperanza means Hope right? not sure just a guess
fuckin' hell. why am I always left out of these things?
Why not listen to -=Dark_Angel=- MP3 Corner #1?!?!? I'm sure it will cheer you up!!!!
http://www.angelfire.com/journal/thwarte
blah blah blah I'm sad. try to use a metaphor or two--some fresh language. you almost did it with the needle in the heart, but instead you missed the target, punctured a lung and are making this gurgling sound. try some concise images.
And thank you my dear for this in particular.
Behind the kitchen she absently splits kindling for the stove.
The linens' sudden flap calls her to lay down the hatchet;
Its dark handle shaped from the limb of an old walnut
growing down in the arroyo.
By the way I look dashing tonight in my high breasted jacket from Estoril, wish you could see me entertain my damsel.
just buggy.
Whew. *gulf claps*