"and you desire for something more, something real" r. the only thing you've shot up is jello off of some lesbian sorority chick's one good tit. shame really. What a waste.

Ha ha ha beaver

The elephant man, without oldman.

Crack is always funny. Say what you want about it...it feels fucking good, you know??

My hoof will tell your face... right after i beat you senseless with a head of kale (the equivalent to being beaten with a head of lettuce, but with more calcium). beware.

Do you realize that i am the only one that loves you and votes on your 'worke'? Thanks for the recipe and the paintings by the way... it's raining here see, and i'm sullen. chirpe. " Of urine and grab bars " ace! by the way i drink my own semen when practicing magicke chirptuals, and was my beautiful face with my own urine too... Mae West, taught me how.8.

BACHIAN SWAGGER AWARDE, along with a bag of chirpes and a crease for your chino's. Did you know i went to Chino high. too. nice pants10!o

This strikes me as more of a series of points than a poem.

Treat me mean, I need the reputation.

I think you've just strung a series of words together without any real unifying theme.

Like something I would do. Good work.

Nice. I'm a sucker for symbolism even when it's not intended. I don't know what you were thinking but I see an old lady losing her beauty and her friends. Sad but good. 7.5 (rounded up since we don't have halfs)

Delightful, hun. My favourite is the Freud one.

Ahh yes... tell me does the fritter symoblize something more? Surely it must and I have the general idea but I wonder if you had a more specific idea.

the Sumerians are laughing at you. that last line is a keeper though.

YAY! There's nothing more to be said.

In the days of my chirpe i was taught what it chirpes to 'e a chirpe.

This is so similar to how i often feel- im amazed

So much to chew on here (excuse the pun) No, my dear friend this put the who in my ha. ....8. I say well done

Yeah, so what's your point?