MuDvAyNe
on The Birds by lunar
27 Jan 2003, 10:34 AM
wonderful, *applauds* wonderful
fool
MuDvAyNe
on Random thoughts poem-do not try to find a meaning for there are too many. by lunar
27 Jan 2003, 10:26 AM
Deep, full of meaning, wow, brilliant
Yummy. Tentententententen!
todays best
Heartfelt but not not heart wrenching, cliched in parts. 6
Well done, Ilike this better than "no descent way"
or decent way.
I wish you'd post more. more more MORE I SAY!
why did I read this? well, I didn't: I stopped at the trite questions.
I think I need more context for this. as it, it seems pointlessly haphazard/random.
erm. good disclaimer at the end?
lovely, although a can think of an adjustment for me, "love" for him would be my number 1 as im so lonely and without love. by the way, u single? ;)
average, sorry i just dont feel anytihng from this
Finished in a rush, but i rather enjoyed how it started, and the wrenchings you applied to some of your articulationso
I don't agree with nentwined here.
This is probably the best sept 11th organic attempt at lucid poetics yet..here, that is..why? because it almost isn't..get it? think about that
Very Good Description Of Feelings.
I would.
doesn't do it for me. too klunky.