rockinindividual
on The Masonic Underling & the 33 degree by horus8
25 Jan 2003, 1:33 PM
"I love you alone." thats great, i like that...6
haha i love that. thats great!!...10 all the way
the rhyme scheme seems kind of forced...and then it doesnt match a real rhythm of any kind....4
thats fucked up man
you need to work on your spelling...and maybe reorganize it a little so its easier to read..everything just seems to blur together the way it is now...3
lovely, painful...9
some deleted user
on some deleted poem
25 Jan 2003, 6:25 PM
lol, nice stuff, worth a 10
lol, it's great, if i could vote better then a 10 i would, lol :)
cool.
Hahaha! Thats great! Ive never read anything like this before!
You're such a prankster, I love pranksters. There is much reference the Alpha male, and you sprawled naked on a cement mixer, what are you trying to tell us? I think you're sexually frustrated. I wonder what your cock looks like. Is it nice? Smooth? Velvety? How big does it get?
You are the unfortunate victim of great looks, great energy, and an intriguing mind. Everybody wants you, it's true, and you have no boundries. You are a PRIEST you just refuse to take your place at the altar. it's so very hard to say no, there's no fun in it. Time to post a poem for you.
i laughed outloud openly to this...fuck! back to the drawing board. i hate you.
i can't stop laughing or reading this! FUCK..THIS is better than king missile's the fish that played the ponys and jesus is way cool, even detachable penis.
"when I noticed a sign nailed to the fence with some nails." brilliant
He seemed agitated. I pointed to the
sausage roll and told him there was no need to worry. He kept on
"shouting. I tried to ignore him, hoping he would just go away." lol.
this is the best thing i've read here..it would make a great short...i'm going to go play something now...you're my hero.
you know that right?
i love the "breathes length into the day" interesting image..6
It's just a strength thing, you need to be patient
Oh how wonderfully beautiful- you are certainly a genius-at least in the art of describing cutlery-if not life itself.
More please.
Thanks..ahhh. for the flush.
forseen is one word