Shardik
on O Man Away From Me by Limness
23 Jan 2003, 5:23 PM
Impressive knitting.
Excellent. Solitude is the poets Eden. A very fine poem, not my cup od tea but beyond rebuke.
You get a kiss and a lollipop from sexy Ornella for your fine, fine poem on the duality of humankind.
very well-written Quarton!(and that's because you know exactly what you are writing about!)I enjoyed the flow especially in fourth stanza.10
very nice indeed if you look at things in that light!the promise of It?what is the "It"?what's the Promise of it!but very well-written.a promising piece of poetry.8
Something about your word choice makes me conjure up images powerful enough to induce nausea. I mean that as a compliment, of course.
Rough around the edges, but not at all abrasive when read. Runs smoothly. Like it a lot.
wow!! i love how it starts out...and then how it continues...and how it ends...its just a great poem about a great style of music, and it flows so beautifully!...10
beautiful, just beautiful
you KNOW i love this poem...((even if i hated you id give it a 9)) mwahahahahahaha
i have a comment, why the fuck none of yall vote for him
Nice observations, and twist.
you know i love this one too...but im giving you a 9 cause i just dont feel like giving it a 10
Like the indian with the stick in walking tall? You are missing a few ''''si
Do you know which road your traveling on? Because, if you do let me know, so that i wont accidentaly merge onto it.
why did you break the form? it was undulating, and you flattened it on the left, and it seems as though it was not intentional--just careless--regardless ofwhether it was or not.
so, what are friends for, if not to call you on such matters?
i'm stuffed
Care for some chai to go with the eye and liver omlet? Delicious. 10