It's good, but get the emotions organized and not so vague. 7

What a sorry piece of crap. Take care.

Liked the vibe in this ..8 Check line 3 as spelling error.

Thanks for sharing.

I'm glad you see things my way. Do you want to come over to my place and continue this discussion over dinner? you can stay for coffeee if you want....

And we all love Horus8 too! I know you told me about this earlier, Mr CD, but still-this is fucking weird!

I've told my beloved that I love her hundreds of times, but she has never said I love you, too. Not even once. But she did tell me she hated me one time. Maybe she hates me because I smother her with love. What about destiny? What about the fact that it was meant to be? How do I know this? Synchronicity. Absolutely unbelievable synchronistic events. I could tell you some wild stuff. Loved your effort. -8-

Hahahaha! Like it, like it a lot, mon ami! Perhaps on D. Hume's one, replace 'gadget' with 'widget'. It doesn't make any sense, but hey-it rhymes and souns funny! Here's a revised first one: There once was a Frog named Descartes Whose ideas held more gas than farts He hadn't a clue And his notions were poo But he got them from fucking French tarts! Have a ten, you comic wonderman!

Wonderful proverb here (Chinese, I think)-"Never laugh at a man's dreams, for a person without dreams is nothing" (I think that's how it goes).

Nice work!

WOW. Have a nice day. 0

For crying out loud, get this shit off our screens! It's a mockery of poetry.

Wondeful, no hesitation in giving this a 10!!!!

I don't see how a vampire (ie. blood sucking, man killing being of evil) can also be a vegan? Its a contradiction in terms, surley? Give it an 8 though, for being honest and stuff.

Erm, the second one is a kids dick, with three testes and a chunk bitten out of the head by you, Bobjim?

WOW!!!!! I especially liked the afro guy.

Wait...

Needed a light read

You have to tell me about this

Quite.