Freya
on Spirit Dance by Mary
10 Nov 2002, 2:28 AM
Nice:)
Now I have a reason to put some effot into my dragon. A battle is sure to ensue.
Beautiful. Poignant.
i disagree with hatters hare in that "doth"(line 4) serves very well in its locale.
Ok, this is just poor. Dude, learn to spell, and don't write any contrived rubbish just to make the lines rhyme. You really need to sort out your act, and please stop spewing that 'daywalker' macho-crap!
the last time the warm came without sound..well..i peed my pants...this is yOUR best work yet. here's a 10. cheers.
once again..you have boldly gone where no man has gone before...so here's my question to you, did you find my watch?
a day in the life of an overworked tampon. is there such a thing as recovery. no, there isn't..just the incessant staunching of your bleeding gash. at least you bleed better than eviltwin, god knows he's too talented and canivingly evil to bleed. here's some pointless number for your friends vagina.8.u
this is the mad russian witches choice of the evening when it comes to tap water filtering devices we should all leave our charcoal havens behind..here's a 10. use it to house train a puppy, or to save the planet if you'd like.??
I read this, passed, and came back to it. I'm glad I did. It gave me a chance to score correctly.10
Yeah, the idiot did kick let dance's ass. Of course lust for life kicked the idiot's ass. And any stooge album kicked any of those.
Both versions are really, really good, bowie's is the better and more interesting pop song, but to hear little iggy belt that song out is a life changing experience.
have you seen mary? after all of secret whispers and unprotected ass sex...you go and do this! my friends and family warned me they said you were just a playa and a pimp, but i trusted you...now i have nothing...you and the ants have carried off my last watermelon...i am lonely, and gay...again.
It's mighty good.yours be the holy laurel bough!100
well that was moving. but it is no noseless dog. heres a ticket to a clippers game. enjoy.9
"my hearts like a butterfly with flowers to give" is reason enough for me to finally get up the nerve to write stephen king that letter about how his acting in creepshow changed my life. forever. oh..."loving juice fruit" wasn't shabby neither.
It's very lyrical and has a good rhythm. Most non rhyming poems i have difficulty reading but yours was will thought out it seems. I like the desrciption of things as you gave them!! I think you did excellent!
Ver nice:)
I'll thank you not to post graphic despriptions of your revolting dreams in future. They are filthy and unnatural.
fucking hilarious. ha!ha! 10.