Blade
on boy girl by little_angel_maria
11 Nov 2002, 1:59 AM
Great poem maria
Hmm, I don't know whether you're a literary genius in the making or just another serial pervert. Still, pretty good stuff.
I've been told by Blade to support him on this one. Its true though, there isn't enough respect for one anothers work. Maybe we don't like it for one reason or another but its only an opinion and no-one can prove an opinion right or wrong. Ever. But yeah, go Blade. (You've mad her all self-defensive now with that ridiculously long numbered comment. Keep it up!)
Very very good, but change dismay for dispair! may not rhyme,but sounds better!
Yardbird
on Ten solid facts about -=Dark Angel=-, by his biggest palm frond, me. by horus8
11 Nov 2002, 2:30 AM
Just what we need, Dark Wanker's own personal sycophant. This is stomach-turning stuff. Horus8, you are either a comic genius or the most pathetic worm on the planet. Either way, this is just tosh.
Wow. I like the classical style of your work, it's a pleasure to read. Great stuff, as always.
Luvverly imagery! Chalk up another one for the TG-meister!!
Write more about this 'mollusc king'. Perhaps he will know the TERRIBLE SECRET OF THE SEA.
PLAGIARISM.
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gandi eat your heart out. then your spinach. 8.
let me guess. jerry springer's inevitable future. quite a remarkably stimulating piece...not a ten inch vibrator with a nickname though, but here's a nine all the same.
i'm gonna have to go with what's behind curtain number three. then a good shampoo and cut.
Loser! It needs to be longer than 3 lines you shit, keep up the jazz!
Or drink some bleached piss!
Well Mr Eskimo King, thanks for your highly constructive comment on my poem. It would be nice to have some reason for your hefty disapproval. Especially when your own offering is a Purple Ronnie rip off. So come on Shakespeare, what was so bad about mine?
The only funnyman here is you, this poem is soooo crap!
Keep up your day job mate, or maybe you're crap at that too!
OMG LOL WTF ASL
When the dad comes does he actually 'come'? That makes it more meaningful probably.