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-=SeTTle=- on some deleted poem 29 Oct 2002, 9:55 PM
When I'm, back in the land of, coca, cola.
-=SeTTle=- on some deleted poem 29 Oct 2002, 9:56 PM
Too much imagery.
Christof on Are you spreading it? by Voth269 30 Oct 2002, 1:24 AM
Nope.
-=SeTTle=- on some deleted poem 29 Oct 2002, 10:06 PM
In seventh grade, there was this older boy with a belt buckle that said "Vern". Yes, the rape story. So I take it you've heard it then.
Tintagiles on some deleted poem 29 Oct 2002, 10:17 PM
All right, all right, all right, I believe you when you say you were a genius back then too. Did I ever doubt you? It's sort of nice to know that even then you could write far, far better than most of the people on here can now. Now then, should I vote on this as I would if I didn't know the title, or vote on it taking your age into account...
-=SeTTle=- on Another Tragic Love Poem by greym0on 29 Oct 2002, 10:18 PM
Excellent work, but it could be a great deal simpler. Less is more you know, according to WORLD CLASS ARCHITECT LUDWIG MIES VAN DER ROHE.
-=SeTTle=- on The Black Hearted Sunflower by anitawit 29 Oct 2002, 10:25 PM
Please excuse Tascobar's comment. He is a robot we built to selflessly suck cocks but somehow he became self-aware.
-=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. on some deleted poem 29 Oct 2002, 11:11 PM
Substituting: Let NOTHING mean 0 Let SOMETHING mean any positive number x Let EVERYTHING mean infinity <><> Let GOD mean infinity Let LIGHT mean ENERGY Let ENERGY be the unit joules J 0/x * <><> = -<><> / (J/J) 0 * <><> = -<><> / 1 0 = -<><> 0 = <><> Sorry old chap, but zero and infinity are sort of arch nemeses. It's good to see people are overcoming the limits of English to express their mind-expanding feelings, but get your fucking arithmetic straight. Fucker.
god'swife on morning by kiki 29 Oct 2002, 11:35 PM
"Somebody's brother"?
Christof on boy girl by little_angel_maria 30 Oct 2002, 1:26 AM
This is so much better than any of your other poems - it's sweet adn funny. maybe 'Dad shoots'? Then you get a rhyme with 'scoots' and cartoon violence at the same time.
Bachus on Corpse's Crescendo by phbiscuit 29 Oct 2002, 9:37 PM
yeah...that is a tough thing to remember how to do? and metaphor-ic-ally too?
limonade on ... by logun2002ya 29 Oct 2002, 9:40 PM
There is a word for people like you and currently it escapes me. If only I could think of it... Imbecile will have to do for now. Using a homonymn of one word does not make you unique, it just makes you silly.
limonade on ... by logun2002ya 29 Oct 2002, 9:45 PM
cummings you ain't.
-=SeTTle=- on some deleted poem 29 Oct 2002, 10:00 PM
Reminds me of my poetry. 7
-=SeTTle=- on some deleted poem 29 Oct 2002, 10:01 PM
SHUT UP SHUT UP SHUT UP.
-=SeTTle=- on Are you spreading it? by Voth269 29 Oct 2002, 10:04 PM
Being 19 years old, nobody suspects me of being the head of a child pornography empire. Oh wait I shouldn't have said that.
-=SeTTle=- on some deleted poem 29 Oct 2002, 10:05 PM
ha ha ha jesus fuck how did you come up with this
-=SeTTle=- on My Feet by smallsun 29 Oct 2002, 10:06 PM
What are you armenian
-=SeTTle=- on i'm the jesse james of the seven-eleven chain by Bachus 29 Oct 2002, 10:19 PM
ha ha ha plop (laughed my nuts off)
-=SeTTle=- on Jackanapes and smoke buttons by Bachus 29 Oct 2002, 10:08 PM
You're clearly gay, what?