I know how it feels

So fucking stupid it hurts to read. Similar to something in snow I peed.

You gotta let go of that negative energy sometime ,dude. Nice haiku though

haha that's awesome

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Hint: the world isn't quite like your parents told you. Now stop whining and scamper off to Kinkos before it closes so that you can finish your zine.

nicely put non fiction. 7.

If elephants don't have knees how do they suck eachother off?? Oh wait never mind.

After spending last weekend on the Yorkshire coastline the first 3 lines seem very pertinant. A good read.

I kinda get it.

maybe change title to 'not about me'?

Yess, and this is really good my friend.

I feel this poem was well written, and I know the feeling, I can definitly relate to the message you are trying to get across.

I dunno why.. but "melted rice" just gets to me.. haha

And I thought I was sensitive to these things. Beautiful. Gotta get to D.C. now.

the movie don juan with brando and depp gives a great definition of love,,try that

brave and insightful. thanks. you really know how to wake me up. i have to shave now, and pretend some more later. 10.

Off with your head! Cheap tramp, rhyming love with above, is crime in these here parts. Get out of town Foxy Brown. "The lucky ones...' deserves better then that stalest of intros. Go away and come back when your ready. On your marks. Get set...

You say my poems suck...

very nice. :)