'Killing little white lies...' I like that.

"McShort-Tempered' deserves 10 but I the pun is awful.

If only those damn eye-racki communists were as wise as you. I think you have singlehandedly found a solution for world peace! KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK!

Good for you.

another fine powdered morning care for a toot...baby bobby sings spanish leather boots...a freudian snuff is best snuffed in the morning. good morning.

i regret to inform you that line 21 has a typo.l.and also this is hogwash. pennicillin is useless these days. it would be 2 cipro pills immediately and den it would be fourteen days of amoxicillin. remember horses are big and need lots of medicine. unfortunately, there meat does tend to reek a bit at first, but it does calm later. unable to vote on this, so i plead the 5th. good day. cad.

'Gather ye rosebuds while ye may'... didn't Herrick write that? About five hundred years ago? And I'll take pride in my madness if I want to, thank you very much.

Lousy Gendo.

It's got its own AT Field!!

"Baka Shinji!"

Second to last stanza extremely weak.

It's like being there... witty.rock on.

Eee. I hope this is meant to be a joke. Line eleven doesn't rhyme. And what's 'sinse'?

If you slash your wrist, you generally die, unless you are treated. You are alive. Ergo, you did not slash your wrist. Or if you did, you didn't really mean it. Ergo, you are a whiny bastard.

The last stanza is terrible. the first two funny.

horus8 haiku oF THE DAY! I'M SORRY but the last line really threw me.ha..wasn't expecting it. lovely. 10.

to think that there are things that make him whole is your first mistake. your second is believing that he didn't care. some times the best weapons acquired in life are given by ghosts. also, to impose that idea upon the next man who approaches with malignant intent..is to only prove that you deserve a bigger dose next time, because you learned nothing from the wicked heart, except of course how to be equally as wicked. sorry, lovely tale though...just ask yourself next time not why did he do this to me, but what god did i piss off that bad in order to send him, or even maybe what happened to him that caused him to go and become a neutral evil warlock-energy manipulator? interesting. you bet. pointless? indeed, but powerfully filled with honesty. 10.

this is indeed a clever device..cheers. 9.

You're just a bore, I'm afraid.

I like the first stanza enough, but the last two leave quite quite indifferent. Sorry.