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<~> on some deleted poem 21 Oct 2002, 11:50 AM
sweet.
<~> on health cards by slipping 21 Oct 2002, 11:43 AM
what is a health card?
Frass on nothing could by nentwined 21 Oct 2002, 11:58 AM
Had to think about this one. Sounds like 220 volt on that shock.
-=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. on Daywalker by Blade 21 Oct 2002, 12:12 PM
This is either the best troll of all time, or the two biggest morons of all time.
-=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. on Daywalker by Blade 21 Oct 2002, 12:19 PM
QUICK EVERYONE! CONVENE IN THE CHATCAVE!!
Bachus on Hoofarama the old nags ed by ==Doylum 21 Oct 2002, 1:50 PM
well with horus8 no longer converging with the 'hoofed-one' i guess i could quote for him "see that? down there...that's my hoof laughing with you...at them, who are they we ask? dunno? never have perhaps, never will...this piece is hilarious and well metered..it's tight like a wife beater..with just a bit of donut juice dried 'pon it. also well contrived with infinite possibilities. 9.o
Bachus on Do Swans Get Jealous? (#2) by Christof 21 Oct 2002, 2:04 PM
i would like it if you changed the second use of the word "white" to cream...yeah sorbet cream..like jizz...was just listening to your dance of the furies?!, great medoly i'd like to say you were a helluve a composer...and not a bad writer neither...heres a ten for you..why? cuz i,ve given you so many fucking zeros up until this point that it makes my head spin, and i can't remember for the life of me why? oh well..i really dug this, and it made me feel...well..hard. thanks. 10..
Bachus on hah by xanthippe 21 Oct 2002, 2:12 PM
YES!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!10. hah.ha..fucking rolling. this is funny er' than best in show.
-=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. on My Friend? by Blade 21 Oct 2002, 4:30 PM
It's spelled "gonhorrhehaea".
-=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. on Die by little_angel_maria 21 Oct 2002, 4:31 PM
And then, my friend, you die. And then, my friend, you DIE, man! beautiful. poetry at its finest.
<~> on InCumBent by slipping 21 Oct 2002, 11:45 AM
"when intimacy rots on your body because you never used your heart " nicely put. shape it some more. it could be great.
<~> on Mi Virgin De Guadalupe by slipping 21 Oct 2002, 11:48 AM
did you mean 'altar' at the last? because i like it better as 'alter'. nice job.
<~> on some deleted poem 21 Oct 2002, 11:53 AM
what is encontrarte?
<~> on unprepared by Aggreddion 21 Oct 2002, 11:54 AM
u shoodent use u. it's bad spellin
<~> on Dream Maker by Blue Magpie 21 Oct 2002, 11:55 AM
prententious.
Frass on A love of the midlands by ==Doylum 21 Oct 2002, 1:12 PM
What's telford, a town? If so, capitalize it. Should I change my holiday plans for Iceland and go to Telford, instead?
Frass on Plucking hearts and banjo by horus8 21 Oct 2002, 1:24 PM
This is one of my favourite H8 rambles; I like the wordplay and the line breaks. Tops are "left footed wind-up nut-kick" and "star blackened druids".
razorgrin on some deleted poem 21 Oct 2002, 1:26 PM
Very nice. I'd like some more drunkenness in my life.
Bachus on Hoofarama the old nags ed by ==Doylum 21 Oct 2002, 1:50 PM
well with horus8 no longer converging with the 'hoofed-one' i guess i could quote for him "see that? down there...that's my hoof laughing with you...at them, who are they we ask? dunno? never have perhaps, never will...this piece is hilarious and well metered..it's tight like a wife beater..with just a bit of donut juice dried 'pon it. also well contrived with infinite possibilities. 9.o
<~> on A love of the midlands by ==Doylum 21 Oct 2002, 1:02 PM
bloody hell