==Doylum
on A Well Worth Wait by savannah
21 Oct 2002, 9:23 AM
another sparkler i'm glad you've met that certain someone, and feel refreshed and happy to go forward to a finer day.
don't vote for your own poems. thank you.
Right, here's hoping my vote won't entail a new edit...
arrrgggghh
These works of yours really would read much better as songs than as poems, somehow.
Hmmm... you definitely do need help, I agree...
Hee hee. Methinks we've found the John Cage of Poemranker... Much better than the others.
'Hang the messenger' is excellent. Nice twist on the normal phrase.
Can we discriminate against Asians? And don't forget that your dear friend blade will want to drink your blood. I fail to see how you will stop me from being rude, saying your poems are crap (this one actually seems a bit better than the others. Would almost make an amusing song, with some work), or killing America.
what is this?
wow this is really good
why
do
you
leave
so
many
lines
between
stanzas?
you judge. why? leave that to the cotton mathers of the world. if you are going to abandon yourself to it, do so. you're not shockong anyone, except maybe shin.
hey wow. this rhymes. IT MUST BE A POEME!!!!
oh
OUCH, I THINK I MUST BE DEAF. THIS ISN'T A SONNET, BY THE WAY. A SONNET HAS FOURTEEN LINES AND RHYMES. SORRY TO DISSAPOINT YOU. HERAT HAS INDEED BEEN MISSING FOR A LONG TIME. 'TRON'? 'RESTTING'? 'REYS'? 'BEYS'? WHAT DO ALGERIAN RULERS HAVE TO DO WITH THIS?
Hee hee, silent voices... That's even funnier than my bird with lips.
even then. it is not sexy. it is sexier. truth