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on Warmth Amidst Winter by loneshadow29
14 Oct 2002, 8:50 AM
nice!7
There's Crap, Then there's this.
It's good but it's not the one.
Interesting point of view tom...interesting...lol...hehe But I like bumblebees, hehe so I give yeah a 10 =) hehe go bumblebees!!
^..^
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ask p&k. he's a journalist.
We are good together. Despite the logistics, you have mixed somehow with my blood. You capture my core. We have our affinity. I am grateful to find you here, and in a sweet and strange way, I love you.
and, calling it 'snow-white' conjurs disney for me. now i am not everyman, but i think you might consider the efeect the title has on the piece overall.
Go ahead, Tarqin, tell it how it is. This is brilliant. This sea you speak of holds an uncanny resemblance to my mind...
Bloody hell! Words fail me.
Marvelous
my carp could conquer your sole any day. with his fins tied behind his back, even.
Thats not very nice!
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Overwhelmed by snowmen? Have been raised in So.Cal. I suppose I'm not one to judge really. That's one scary snowman.
I like this poem's subtlety. It works for me.
Well, he''s dressed in sorrow, compares himself to death, and grieves for his soul.
'barren in bounty'--'barren, late of bounty'? the birdsong is a beautiful touch, as are the lips and hips and the promise of both. your aim is indeed true.
Viva la France
Stunning