Tom Colebrooke
on Sod by jrtails
14 Oct 2002, 7:23 AM
Not very inventive EH!
Bravo
Your Sick
Quite good, nice images
only a mere smackerel for me, roo
Quite the impressive piece,sir. Um, my skills are not at this level yet but I tripped over "still feels and think fertile". A typo maybe? I felt the presence of a winery. I enjoy watching you and god's wife banter.
It's funny and I learn small things too. Thanks.
God, won't you guy's please stop bickering...if you haven't noticed the point of this site is to post your poems, and help other peolpe fix theres. Blade, don't listen to some of the asses on this site, It's a nice poem, yes it does need some touchs up, but other than that I like it. I give it a ~*5*~ =)
This has Truly stirred my soul
It doesn't matter if people don't like your work, jrtails -- three of my poemes were the three worst-rated poemes for a while, but I persevered and look where I am now!! Only halfway down the worst list!!!
Very Funny
Yooooooooooouuuuuuuuuuuu SUCK!!!!!
P.S.Just like your Poems
Oh good God, no!! Not an "GOWN OF SORROW"!!! I bought my gown from a very disreputable Merchante who had but a badmington racquet where his face should have been. Perhaps it is a GOWN OF SORROW.
This is sick and twisted and how the hell did you think of it. And WHY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Sorry, but I just think this is childish pap. Poor structure, very wishy-washy, and very cliched. 1/10
I think you have opened a can of worms here. Dangerously offensive, but then I like work which challenges the stereotype of acceptableness. 7, for sheer bravado.
Staid and boring. I had the time of my life at university, but you inject all the enthusiasm of a twenty-year prison stretch into this poem. I appreciate you're telling us you'd rather be out of the education system, but you don't do it well. 3.
I don't like this one little bit. 1.
Great this is truly a piece of your life
WASTED
Yo maria Excellent poem it's real good to see you express yourself this openly and youve got a friend in me