Tibbs
on Essential Love by some deleted user
8 Oct 2002, 10:46 PM
when i read this, i feel putrid all over. what treacly tripe.
Nice poem, I guess I've felt this way myself once....
Not bad... Kind of deep.... I like it
strange. i didn't enjoy this much.
Ambiguous Love Poem for a Girl I Never Knew.
Service
on Mean Matt was so mean, when a homeless guy asked him for change he gave him a -blank- by beakism
8 Oct 2002, 10:04 PM
Angry?
Succinctly put. 7. I like the title and particularly the rhyming of the first and second lines; rare to see in a haiku.
I liked, it was a short poem, but it said so much.
Ilike this. Except for "live and die..." how does one live and die by fraility. I'm not getting it. The last couplet is strong, sensual and sad. For your mere 19, not bad at all. 19, good god.
Succinctly put. 7. I like the title and particularly the rhyming of the first and second lines; rare to see in a haiku.
Well these are pretty bad. Maybe drunk is not your color. There not as bad as the moronic comments left by Jigg. You're not really saying anything are you?
If you come across Sherman Alexie's (he is a writer that is not dead) "Alcoholic Love Poems," read them. It might help you clear these up a bit.
damn...i'm pretty sure that i'm one of those "greenhorns" although i'd like to think not. anyway your poem is true enough...although no mention of menstruation...i thought you said it went with everything!
riiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiight
so far you're poems never cease to amaze me. in a good way of course. so good...can't find the words...
your poems are often so convoluted that i can't decide if they are genius or chum. they make the ganglia twitch, itch, bitch. ditch me. lick me.
Great poem and I totally agree with the asian part.
That gave me a chuckle.
Write me one of these.