it's a good poem but there are alot of repeated words,like forever,friendship..etc!

This is good, the discussion of differing parts of one's own mind. Not sure about rhyming shaken and taking, though, but I like the idea of sacrificing the body to save the heart.

i liked this one so much,expecially the last stanza and i liked that one too " they burnt our dreams" it's awesome,keep up the good work.

I've seen a suicide. Guy shot himself with a .22 handgun. It's nothing more than sad and selfish. We owe you no apology either. BUT there's a rythm.2

I really like this.9 Iwish I understood (latin) the title.

My mom was a Gem. An alcoholic too. This makes me smile and scares the bejeeezus out of me too. Kudos.8

I'm not the best at rcognizing patterns but I think this needa just a little tweaking. Try shifing some lines around.7

Can't really argue with that.

This is irony, right? Let's hope so.

I like this, but it doesn't really achieve anything on its own.

Not bad - and the last stanza is stronger than the first two.

it's good but it's more like a song than a poem,it has a good rhyming

i liked this alot,i'm a gemini too,but there's a true feeling besides it' s a creative idea to write about

i liked the first part most of all

Minimalist

Made me laugh, horologically speaking ( geddit ?)

it's a bit mysterious but it's a good poem,i liked that stanza "feelings strong and truths will dare".

it's smart to express self-emptiness by describing the crowd outside

If I were, I'd be too ashamed to get out of bed in the morning.

You mean French?