Sorry, too personal to rank.

I don't get it. It seems like you wanted to be morbid but then there's the Zoom, Varoom, and Booms. Even if you were going for contrast I think they spoiled the mood. If they were simply to signify the car then I still don't like them. Other than that I like but they ruined it just enough for me that the 8 falls to a 5.

Great! I love "the wings fashioned from old thrift-store aprons." Were not for the "and really tasty food" I would give it a 9. 8.

How is it that I some how missed your work until tonight?

You are deeper than I. What is wrong with this system?!!! Iknow I scored you a 7!!!!

Thanks zin, I was just kicking myself for not staying in spanish in H.S. It does seem to flow though.7

vERY emotional yet point driven. My kind of writing.

I can tell that you write with emotions, as I do. I feel you on this one.

I agree with livingcanvas,I hope you were writing this out of thought and not experience. I too have read all of your poems and the respect is mutual. Until we read again.....

No entiendo. Todo esta demasiado confuso. El primer verso si se entiende, pero comensando con {si ay tiempo me olvideras} no sera {si uviera tiempo me olvideras}? During the day we search for a way to live/If we meet, it is by mistake/ Everything that happened, we shall forget, and,/I know it is not the truth. (I don't understand what you're talking about).

babelfish says: If you say to me that you love I to me that it is not the truth. When you say to me that you hate I to me that you have found your heart. If you cry when you sing I to me that it is not the truth. If (ay olvideras) time me but no longer (ay) long time. We looked for the way to live by the day and if we were, it is in error. Everything that step, us (olvidera), and, I that it is not the truth. I have no spanish. :)

Gret example of style over substance. I mean this as high praise. A poem doesn't always have to heavy with weight, but light with sound. The second stanza is delightful. I love picturing you with one eyebrow up, slightly perturbed by her.

This is so sweet and really nice. I like it ALOT!

POW-ER-FUL. Assuming spelling is purposeful,10

this sucks. I am a sucker for depth, meaning.... and love. Did i mention Love?

However, i will give you points for your creativity in ability to express what you are striving to say... similarities, not differences.

What is a wight?

Ah yes, but it feels good,no? If you stop will you cease to be? Overall, well executed ,fun.8

I love your poem.

Another hit.