poetandknowit
on Incidentally, you might want to look up 'Amplexus' by Shin-Bojangles
29 Aug 2002, 9:32 PM
size doesn't count
LOOK OUT fuck...timber...she's a leaner...run...RUUUUUUUUNNNNNN!!!!!! four!
Fucking brilliant!!!! Mega 10.
Oh fuck, another newbie, here we go again.
"Do you hear me/Do you care?" I could not finish this poem, sorry. But it is pure genius. Pure genius.
another fine example of why michael jackson looks the way he does and touches little boys on their penises. their nice soft penises, remind me of a flying leaf that lands right 'pon my lap...i guess that 69 in your name makes you an expert on leaf navagations and love huh.....better leaf the poetry to those who write and dont BLOW! you blow....lol! and deep down inside too.....you fail..misserably. good luck.. have fun here...stay as long as you want, and write more.....please..i need the extra targets.i
god! this is to good to be true...you are priceless...d.a DAMNIT! quit fucking around dude...you're realy starting to worry me...pull your evil spirit out of this retarded girl. PLEASE!. for the love of jesu' just fucking stop it please...god..plea......make him stop doing that.f
d.a's got a point i say replace the word "that" with cunt, the term "I" with "the shank of maggotry" and the with "fish monger". great. thanks. may a rock from outer space fix your problems. and mine too. soon
Shin-Bojangles
on Incidentally, you might want to look up 'Amplexus' by Shin-Bojangles
29 Aug 2002, 9:54 PM
Enough is never enough. There's nothing wrong with having a theme.
i give you full credit for the theme....i especially love all of your diverse and well rounded characters especially......keep up the go/od work. that ring things pretty hip too. quite moving. indeed.i
poetandknowit
on Incidentally, you might want to look up 'Amplexus' by Shin-Bojangles
29 Aug 2002, 10:08 PM
I never said anything about the theme. I was merely analyzing the merits of a LIMERICK that was making an attempt at humor. Besides the poets peeps and, of course, the razorgirl, and maybe even Bachus, if his mother watching Letterman and he has had a few would find this the least bit interesting.
See Ming Merciless, whose attempt also sucks, to see exactly how clever this poem is not. Everybody with a Gallagher sense of humor is doing it.
Shin-Bojangles
on Incidentally, you might want to look up 'Amplexus' by Shin-Bojangles
29 Aug 2002, 10:10 PM
Damnation! My riviting words of wisdom keep showing up in the wrong places... That "enough" stuff was supposed to be somewhere else, somewhere much less phallic. Anyway, what I was TRYING to say back THEN is that you people are really awful. No good. That's about the gist of it, anyway.
Go outside and play, will ya?
I feel you honey.... I fell the loss...the leave...fall..ing...i am..afraid.. of ;;; falling--- asleep000before... i fin--ish ..the first ..line. Absoulte brillance. More, please, more....
This has come up four times in the last six entries. What is so random about that? It is a communist plot!!
Girlfriend, please don't say that you would really die a horrible death over some guy - that just ain't right. I do understand that it feels that way now, but someday... someday, when you are a little bit older, you'll know that the statement is ridiculous.
Oh god, another clever ditty. I went to the star trek convention here in misery and I met that robot and you know what--he was not a robot after all. It killed me to find out that everything i thought was real on TV was just made up. Well at least I have these conventions and david eddings and the hobbit and oh, yes, lovecraft--go go, Cthulhu, go.
This piece is complex and intense - I'd really like to see more from you. Please work on format though, I hate to scroll while reading - throws off the scan. Thanks. 10/10
Kristen - God and Men have absolutely nothing to do with one another.