regarding some deleted poem...	DurtKL 65.60.139.26	8-Mar-05/1:26 PM
banda aceh...tsunamied? wet? debris? dead bodies? lol
Re: Pilgrim by richa	INTRANSIT 205.188.116.67	8-Mar-05/1:48 PM
richa. you posted. how wierd. the crust reference makes me grin.
Re: Beetwen by Dovina	INTRANSIT 205.188.116.67	8-Mar-05/2:04 PM
10 for the difficulty in intentionally fucking the spelling up.
Re: Fat girls Who Wear Short Skirts During Winter Quarter by DurtKL	thepinkbunnyofdoom 4.224.9.93	8-Mar-05/2:37 PM
Whats sad is its true, but funny none the less, welcome back. <3 Jason
Re: Poet, Earth mover by INTRANSIT	Dovina 12.72.5.14	8-Mar-05/2:54 PM
If you're calling it Poet, Earth Mover, then maybe use bulldozer in the last line. Or you could call it Poet, Farmer.
Re: eat what you want. by burgerking33	burgerking33 69.242.53.159	8-Mar-05/3:14 PM
great job a beautiful poem and well written. well done.
regarding some deleted poem...	burgerking33 69.242.53.159	8-Mar-05/3:18 PM
beautifully written. a 10. well done, an excellent writer. A++++++++++++!!
Re: James The Dashing Pirate by thepinkbunnyofdoom	burgerking33 69.242.53.159	8-Mar-05/3:21 PM
brought a tear to my eye and was very inspirational. well done, you're amazing. well written. a beautiful poem. I'll give you a 6, because i still think you need a little bit of work. you're on the right track! good.
regarding some deleted poem...	burgerking33 69.242.53.159	8-Mar-05/3:25 PM
thank you, thank you, thank you. you made me teary and it is the best poem i have ever read. EVER. i would consider becoming a serious poet if i was you. beautifulli written and inspirational. be sure to read "eat what you want" by burgerking33. thank you!!!
Re: A Kiss Beneath The Blossom Tree by Caducus	burgerking33 69.242.53.159	8-Mar-05/3:32 PM
i reread your poem and i take back what i said. i was a little too harsh on you, and i'm sorry. It wasn't bad, but i think it needs revision. i'll give you a 6. a very good improvement since your earlier writings, may i add. -thanks
Re: A Kiss Beneath The Blossom Tree by Caducus	burgerking33 69.242.53.159	8-Mar-05/3:35 PM
in-cred-a-bull. man, this was AM-AZ-ING. this is what poetry is all about, well done. i wish i could give you an 11. *****************10********************
Re: Scars by DevilTmptrss	burgerking33 69.242.53.159	8-Mar-05/3:38 PM
kinda depressing, don't you think. if it's based on a true and personal experience, i feel for ya. It was a decent piece of writing, but it needs revision to make it to the top. ****************6********************
regarding some deleted poem...	burgerking33 69.242.53.159	8-Mar-05/3:40 PM
well written, humurous. i'll give ya a 7.
Re: Rough Translation (Prose) by William Alfaro	Dovina 12.72.5.14	8-Mar-05/4:14 PM
I'm sure thepinkbunnyofdoom appreciates the 10 you gave to each of his poems today, and the zeros needed to raise several of his to the top 20, helped of course by the 10's of Vince Dolamando, Nicely done! You realize, the poetntial is unlimited with multiple usernames and annonymous votes.
Re: Disable by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I.	edpeterson 68.79.52.31	8-Mar-05/5:32 PM
I would like to request a link to one of your P.I. Readings, as recommended to me by jeremi, horus8, and the 3 or 4 other names he has on this site. I hear they are the highest imaginable art, and would love to sample.
Re: genious by the_poetess	INTRANSIT 152.163.100.67	8-Mar-05/7:23 PM
Are you a Saggitarius?
regarding some deleted poem...	INTRANSIT 152.163.100.67	8-Mar-05/7:27 PM
The one that looks like a g-nome.
Re: Today, last year was on a Sunday by thepinkbunnyofdoom	INTRANSIT 152.163.100.67	8-Mar-05/7:30 PM
Easy day. These things usually drag on for months. Who the hell is Devilbuni?
Re: eat what you want. by burgerking33	thepinkbunnyofdoom 4.224.30.149	8-Mar-05/8:43 PM
And you bother to write poetry because? Your sister dared you? You thought that somehow you'd develop a skill for it that no knew you possed? Or you were way too bored? Whatever the reason, stop. Your not good at it, and if think this is good than I pity you, and say, read some lyrics from the music you listen to. Because if you at least read the words of people using things like similes, and metaphors, you might actually have come here with something better that looks like a poem. -0- I see no artistic value in this what so ever. Much less your praising yourself before anyone else read your words(All though whether you knew it or not at the time it was smart, because I doubt mainy other people will).
Re: A Nation by the_poetess	Rainbow_chaser 64.229.170.87	8-Mar-05/8:46 PM
i love a good eye opening poem. good job, im not american, blessed be. but as a human i agree.