| Re: Mallard by richa |
Lifeboatman 203.104.94.2 |
21-Dec-04/4:39 AM |
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good.. 10.. I'm having duck tonight
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| Re: Horror at the grotto by scitz |
Lifeboatman 203.104.94.2 |
21-Dec-04/4:41 AM |
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| Re: Ruins by Caducus |
Lifeboatman 203.104.94.2 |
21-Dec-04/4:44 AM |
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| Re: Twin Forks by auscot |
Lifeboatman 203.104.94.2 |
21-Dec-04/4:46 AM |
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| Re: Satan's Daughter by unouluvme |
Lifeboatman 203.104.94.2 |
21-Dec-04/4:55 AM |
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dude, you have no idea what you are talking about.. 0
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| regarding some deleted poem... |
Lifeboatman 203.104.94.2 |
21-Dec-04/4:58 AM |
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| Re: Into My World by sliver |
Bhaskaryya 210.214.171.163 |
21-Dec-04/7:43 AM |
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Renee Blue Eyes!! Dedication your love surely!!
Flowed pretty well towards the end but there was something wrong with the flow initially. Honestly, the 2nd line needs work.
Good work though, I love acrostics. I have many of my own. Hopefully I'd post them soon.
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| Re: Into My World by sliver |
Bhaskaryya 210.214.171.163 |
21-Dec-04/7:45 AM |
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I meant to put "Dedication TO your love...". A typo!!
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| regarding some deleted poem... |
Bhaskaryya 210.214.171.163 |
21-Dec-04/7:55 AM |
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Okay, that's not bad, not bad at all. But it could be made better with some more uniformity in your stanzas. The flow breaks a little too often!!
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| Re: Marrowless highway by INTRANSIT |
Bhaskaryya 210.214.171.163 |
21-Dec-04/7:56 AM |
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Wow!! That's indeed one of the most unique poems I've read in any of the poetry sites. Not flawless definitely, but better than most stuff.
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| Re: A Flower for Monet by Shuushin |
Bhaskaryya 210.214.171.163 |
21-Dec-04/7:57 AM |
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Love the weave of words. Check me out if you could!!
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Bhaskaryya 210.214.171.163 |
21-Dec-04/8:03 AM |
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The rhymes are kinda not very uniform. Nice imagery though!! A 7 from me!!
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| Re: Mallard by richa |
blacksoul 204.215.33.83 |
21-Dec-04/8:03 AM |
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We share a poetic bond; much respect.Boom shaq a lacka
I'm having jackass (smile)-8-
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Bhaskaryya 210.214.171.163 |
21-Dec-04/8:09 AM |
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Kinda cliched!! No offences but I have just read too much of these stuff lately. The expression is just about fine though!!
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Bhaskaryya 210.214.171.163 |
21-Dec-04/8:12 AM |
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That took me around 20 minutes!! Very impressive work, indeed!!!
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| Re: DJ Bling Bling spins authenticity by Jeremi B. Handrinos |
Bhaskaryya 210.214.171.163 |
21-Dec-04/8:13 AM |
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Nice!! Haikius could be challenging. Well pulled off!!
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Bhaskaryya 210.214.171.163 |
21-Dec-04/8:13 AM |
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That's bloody cruel!! A 7 from me!!
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| Re: DJ Bling Bling spins authenticity by Jeremi B. Handrinos |
Bhaskaryya 210.214.171.163 |
21-Dec-04/8:14 AM |
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| Re: Death by Liquid by PsydewaysTears |
wFraser Allonby Q.C.w 195.157.153.249 |
21-Dec-04/8:21 AM |
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| Re: Charms by auscot |
fevriere 62.254.128.4 |
21-Dec-04/9:01 AM |
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Love it. Sounds all drunken and clumsy. Might want to put line 5 in speech marks.
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