Re: Perfection Forever by odon919	affei09 202.81.170.187	28-Aug-04/1:38 AM
cute
Re: corrupting you by skaskowski	Brandy_n_Cali 4.182.93.229	27-Aug-04/9:33 PM
NICE!!
Re: Cicada Years by seanlb1	affei09 202.81.170.187	28-Aug-04/1:41 AM
great! i agree
Re: I Can't Move On by Sirens_Voice	affei09 202.81.170.187	28-Aug-04/1:50 AM
i love it
Re: Just A Dream by Blindpoetry	darylchew 202.156.2.130	28-Aug-04/2:05 AM
true.
Re: Insomnia by BiggRobb	affei09 202.81.170.187	28-Aug-04/1:54 AM
cute!
Re: New Horizon by Kitch	affei09 202.81.170.187	28-Aug-04/1:37 AM
great job!! i love it!
Re: Lachrymose by affei09	affei09 202.81.170.187	28-Aug-04/1:46 AM
Lachrymose means cause of tears
regarding some deleted poem...	darylchew 202.156.2.130	28-Aug-04/2:02 AM
hahaha this is really funny. dirty.
Re: Your Great by scitz	darylchew 202.156.2.130	28-Aug-04/2:04 AM
...reminds me of her.
Re: 32 Truths and 1 Lie by wilco	Brandy_n_Cali 4.182.93.229	27-Aug-04/9:29 PM
WOW!! I REALLLLY LIKE THIS!!!! GREAT JOB YOU HAD SO MANY UNCONNECTED THINGS THAT MADE IT GRABBY!!!
Re: NO TIME!! by Brandy_n_Cali	Brandy_n_Cali 4.182.93.229	27-Aug-04/9:35 PM
COME ON PEOPLE GIVE ME SOME FEED BACK ON THIS ONE PLEASE!!!!!!
Re: this one is for Jon by tstormer	darylchew 202.156.2.130	28-Aug-04/2:05 AM
weird. not good.
Re: Coming Back by x311	affei09 202.81.170.187	28-Aug-04/1:35 AM
i can really relate to your poem coz im on an ldr
Re: Haiku by Cha no Onna	darylchew 202.156.2.130	28-Aug-04/2:17 AM
nice.
Re: hurt by yOum|n	darylchew 202.156.2.130	28-Aug-04/2:09 AM
sometimes i feel this way too. good.
Re: Masculine by temptalia	darylchew 202.156.2.130	28-Aug-04/2:07 AM
nice imaging. i could almost imagine it.
Re: solitude by darylchew	BigB 202.156.2.50	27-Aug-04/10:51 PM
its not bad.i like it!
Re: Ghost in My Swimming Pool by ObiWonKn	darylchew 202.156.2.130	28-Aug-04/1:57 AM
i like this one. the ghost is obviously your own reflection. but i dont understand some parts. "He came again last night To remind me of you"
Re: Broken by psychedelic	darylchew 202.156.2.130	28-Aug-04/2:00 AM
feelings of depression. the hardened heart cant allow warmth in anymore. after a breakup i suppose. nice. although the rhyming here "My heart's numb I feel dumb" is....a little forced maybe.